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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    at a glance, I thought it said Resp. hahahaha. wow. well, it looks pretty good actually, but I don't know what to say that can help you, other than add the definition into the E and S, and to color it. and where is the vanishing point on your 3D?

    and Mero: AH, I see it now. okay.
     
  2. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    kest your E and S are the best letters. the k and t are pretty generic. i like it reguardless.

    mero- dope. only thing is i kept thinking it said moero.
     
  3. klic

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    vanishing point? its just a simple downward 3D
     
  4. Aerosoloholic

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  5. CrustOner

    CrustOner Elite Member

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    oh shit sorry, i was half asleep.. haha. you're right, Janek.

    Intermediate thread worthy?
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    Aerosoloholic, I can't see the picture, sorry.
    Kest and Mero Already critted you guys.
    Tezey sick as usual, although the last one doesn't tickle my fancy. the first one also looks like bad can control, but the middle speaks for that.
    Jers I don't like the background, but the letters are cleaann, but I hate the way the I looks like a 4 with a dot above it.
    Haze That's the sickest shit I've seen on here in a while. I don't really like the block E at the end though. and the last one would be my favorite if you had used the middle one's E, but a little modded to fit the style you were going for on the last one.
    BigBlue Dope throwies as always. I don't have much else to say, ha.
    Mers I've seen that same shit a million times over. It's getting old, haha. Shake it up a bit. The R is your handy is ugly as fuck. Change your throwie up a bit, too. Either that, or stop posting them.
    Other Mero piece rough draft: Keep doing that, I want to see it finished.
     
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  6. Aerosoloholic

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    the shading and 3d look good but the letter structure is pretty bad
     
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  11. TheMurderousMisterMero_

    TheMurderousMisterMero_ Banned

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    this is soo dope dude.id love to see this roll by on a freight or somethin...keep doin this shit..
     
  12. Aesir

    Aesir Senior Member

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    VIEL - All that shit is FIRE, except for the one WITH fire ironically enough. i think that if you just did it all black for the fill it'd look better.
     
  13. BIGdreamSCHEME

    BIGdreamSCHEME Senior Member

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    viel's got the freshest shit in this thread
    and probably one of the few writers who are actually intermediate..
     
  14. HAIRCUT

    HAIRCUT Banned

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    NEW TO THREAD....maybe?
    what ya'll think.

    probably more on the beginning side, but i dont think toy?
    do i need a reality check?

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  15. Lunchbox

    Lunchbox Senior Member

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    Sorry Crust, but thats not intermediate in the least, all you'r structure is wack, those extensions don't make sense and are pointless, and over-all it just looks ugly, and not in the good way. Back to Tot Books
     
  16. B.S. POLICE

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  18. B.S. POLICE

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    the top is not a big fan of the bottom one though stick to simps
     
  19. HAIRCUT

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