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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    reminds me of atlok7 a bit. (who i miss seeing)
     
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  2. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    ai521.photobucket.com_albums_w335_jokster004_STP60035.jpg
     
  3. luvsac

    luvsac Senior Member

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    ^ the LEW is pretty solid but i dont like the S
     
  4. harmlessart

    harmlessart Banned

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    leaks - extend the top part of your S more and you could easily make that into a sick throwie

    ..imo
     
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  5. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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    Epoc - i like it, just connect the R more and clean up the S.. like virus said.


    ai621.photobucket.com_albums_tt300_2wayducttape_DSCF0773.jpg
    crits on these lettskis?
     
  6. harmlessart

    harmlessart Banned

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    ^dank letters bro. I have no criticism on this
     
  7. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    Lews s looks like a bad version of mine. Lol k still love u tho
     
  8. 99%Shit

    99%Shit Senior Member

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    That 's' in 'LEWS' is fine without the loop. I rock it in some of my throws, I close the cutout section a little more like a circle, if ya follow. That'd be a dece throw with consistent height. The dub in it works, used similar as well. I usually go with lower case 'e's with those style though.


    EMEK, space those out 'cause the 'E' covers too much of the following letter, or maybe put the bottom of the downstrokes over the 'E'. Change up the middle point in your 'm'. lose the bit following the 'k'. The bit attached to the top of the 'm' is a little distracting. Overall though, potential for a nice simple.

    That RESK has a nice 'R' and 'K', the 'S' needs fixing, but it's not without potential, but if you do a lower case 'e', you'll probably have to scrap that 's'. Personally I'd throw a lower case 'e' after that 'R', if you imagine the curve continuing around, you should see how it'd look.
     
  9. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    ai32.tinypic.com_xbxzso.jpg

    anyone else want to exchange?
     
  10. luvsac

    luvsac Senior Member

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    emek- from what ive seen from you...your letters are developing very quickly :D
     
  11. k'n1ve

    k'n1ve Senior Member

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    virus---is that other sketch battle not gonna be posted brother?
     
  12. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    resk - i think that the lower right bar of the r shouldve been shorter and the 3d vanish a little lower, just personal opinion though.
    lews - as long as you fix up that s your throw will be just fine.
    emek - i can't p[ut my finger on it but i don't like it, something with the m , just personal opinion though.
    did this today and want some crits because i rly dunno how i feel about it
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  13. Watfe

    Watfe Member

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    seen it beofre
     
  14. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I feel you guys are progressing, but you're lacking orihginality in your letters and should move to the toy thread. Just my opinion though. Don't cry to me if you have any objections.
    Resk, you shouldn't outline the black on the corners in your 3D, just personal opinion, but I don't like the way it looks. I'll show you what I mean if you don't understand.
     
  15. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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    I feel you guys are progressing, but you're lacking orihginality(nice spelling btw)in your letters.


    I couldn't agree more with this statement. the point of doing simple and working your letters is so you learn structure and then can establish your own funk. Most of you bar out a peice and then just proceed to do what you've seen done b4. This gets you stuck with the same outlines this make your letters generic. do simples until you understand letters do em till it becomes 2nd nature. Then working a style you like or would like to call your own s up to you. Slow down, learn to crawl, learn to walk, then walk for a while till you get bored, then jog till your outta breathe, then run. It takes time to work a style it takes time for your letters to become "yours". Don't rush it cuz it WILL show. Take it for what you will.
     
  16. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I'm on my iPod niggha, it's hard to spell :(

    Originality.
     
  17. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  18. Messer

    Messer Senior Member

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    bulltime- i'm loving that denver sketch except for the colours...idk they just don;t do it for me
    alts- i think i am going to touch myself to your work later


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    pen sketchs.... only thing i've put on paper for a while.
     
  19. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  20. STFUPPERCUT

    STFUPPERCUT Senior Member

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    true say