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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. plumbererer

    plumbererer Moderator

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    i have to agree to disagree. its her own unique style and its a little rough around the edges but it looks good. if she can pull of nice simples then id say keep trying to develop it but from what im loooking at its aesthetically pleasing and not a mish mash of bullshit.
     
  2. -Wings-

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  3. ice age

    ice age Member

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    sayo: im diggin what your doing with the new name
    love the colors on that ECA peace

    plumberererer: im sorry but what???
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    i dont want to start a fight but no
     
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  4. plumbererer

    plumbererer Moderator

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  5. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Not sure where I stand, but not taking uber toy crit no more. Just a single letter incase.
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  6. ESKiMO2

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  7. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    mmm ya banana skinny. Feels a bit edgy eskimo, but I still like it overall. Also the forcefield in the top left part under the shadow looks dope as fuck.
     
  8. bulltimeJAMP

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    eskimo sadly what ruins that is the forcefield color reacts to the darkness and gets all neon which looks not so go with the fill, despite what thrice up there says. too bad bc i like seeing one words skecthes from you.
     
  9. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    I actually did that in photoshop. It was originally green.
     
  10. Incite

    Incite Senior Member

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    @eskimo

    i like the fact you took the pic at an angle, makes it really stand out

    the "e" is a little too fat but it still looks fresh
     
  11. ice age

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  12. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    thanks for the defence :)
    ehhhh i'm working on it :)...hence why i'm not posting in the big boys...
    hate away :):
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    the shittiest U i have ever drawn:
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  13. Incite

    Incite Senior Member

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    i dont see a "u"

    are you painting with water colors?
     
  14. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    nope.....letraset pro markers.....the paper in my book is sshiitttaayyyy...but it;s cheap so...
     
  15. bulltimeJAMP

    bulltimeJAMP Senior Member

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    resp dont think thts the only thing keeping you from the regular blackbooks.
     
  16. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    im a rub my wet salty balls all over this bitch
     
  17. Geraldo

    Geraldo Banned

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    resp. balance the tops of the letters. make the jagged bumps the same for each letter. know what im sayin? itll compliment the flow a lot more. the top half of the sketch is aiight. the bottom half is horrendous. tone it down a bit with the sharp edges. work on the basic letter for a bit to get it down. then add the bumps an shit back in. its a good idea. but right now you cant pull it off cuz the letters themselves are kinna weak. your gonna want solid ass letters before you start making them less solid with extensions an all that biz. the loopy shit at the bottom is ugly as fuck. if your gonna do a loop. make it circular. dont make it some half ass octagon with shit stick outta it. know what im sayin? skip the coloring too. it just takes away valuble time. you can do another 3 outlines by the time you finish the fill. the lines inside the bars are kinna wack too. dont look good. that first green sketch is the best only cuz you aint tryin to whyle it out too much. work on that one.

    eskimo, i find your style really rough around the edges and not always pleasent on the eyes. i think it would look fly as hell if you had more parallell lines. if you know what im sayin. keep the letters in the same directions rather than havin em in a sorty iffy right direction

    seyo, thats 4th sketch is a solid ass simple. i think you should work with that one. you could add some arrows that would flow well with it. much better than your old wings sketches

    thrice, the extension at the top is too thin. make it thicker to balance with the rest of the A.
     
  18. Speedy

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    Ew. Keep this shit in the toy thread.
     
  19. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Yo if you know your suppose to be in here there should be any question of if you should stay or not. Thats to all of you.BUt here are some more pic. and more to come.

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  20. Fube

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    all of u shut the fuck up. i approved this last night and it has 3 pages already.

    i dont give a fuck what u think its staying for a min.

    i will not sticky this but evidently people need another place to post sketchs other then the bbt. if u guys are looking for someone to tell u your not toy then PRACTICE YOUR LETTERS. u have to earn respect. always wanting some "title" with all these rules on where your letters should be is not going to help u progress as a writer.

    stop taking the easy way out.

    I WILL be deleting shit i feel is not worthy.