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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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  2. UpstateHate585

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  3. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    :(

    100%
     
  4. UpstateHate585

    UpstateHate585 Elite Member

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    no offense dude, seeing as i myself am shunned by the intermediate thread. just think it could use a lot of work.
     
  5. fromthegrave

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    fromthegrave Senior Member

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    i like vagina.. no butt holes are involved in any sexual act im in.
    we'll see if i dont write u up wen u steal cookies kid.. we'll see.
     
  7. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    oh i see. i thought you meant was i serious that it sucked. i am.

    yeh...it sure does need work. luckily its not letters i have used before when this 'style' and only took a couple mins. otherwise id have to excuses to save my self love.
     
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  8. thedudeman

    thedudeman Senior Member

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    why the toothbrush?? im all for hygeine *sp* but i mean......
     
  9. Epoc

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  11. Tonka

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    Can someone exchange with me throwies i am not toy just am fucking stumpppped with my throw up. I write dale. I will be sure to give you some nice throw ups
     
  12. EST2007

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    not a fan of your G and E. and everything is a bit too smushed together
     
  13. UpstateHate585

    UpstateHate585 Elite Member

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    haha epoc thanks man. i goin out for a bit today but i'll sketch you something when i get home
     
  14. BEAS one

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    pretty new to the site...Love that last piece man flows nice but is too close together imo.
    havnt written in awhile...could i get some crits?

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  16. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    unless yuo wanted the small to big bars thing, the proportions are horrible. and the letters dont flow at all
     
  17. BEAS one

    BEAS one Member

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    3d is way off man and dont flow real well...anybody have some crits for mine? :D
     
  18. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    View attachment 513838

    Solty exchange

    Sek - I would say to work on having more flow to the letters to me it looks too clunky, also I don't like the K it doesn't fit with the other letters in the piece, and in the throw the E looks to complex compared to the S and the K
     
  19. Abor Rudest

    Abor Rudest Senior Member

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    the l looks like a j and that t looks like it smokes rocks.

    sek, that s is decent. everything else needs work.

    also, bump for crits.

     
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  20. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    abor- top one could be sick. the B is way too skinny (front part) compared to rest and doesnt match up the style and doent let the bottom of it overlap.
    i dont like the bottom one.

    alts - beans. i think the lumps out of S and L are weird. and the middle growth on bottom the Y lag is wierd too. I think you tried too hard to make the three identical at the bottom.

    horrible gramemr this time.

    still trying to make something i dont hate.

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