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sketch for my son, Jack

 

robot boy!niceley done is he gunna get into graff?
i thought this sketch was alright when i looked at it

 

get rid of that squiggly extension off the A

 

which part the skinny or the big? the bigs a part of the t's spade but i guess k

 

the skinny

and the top bar of the T needs to be fatter to match the rest

 

k so theright part of the t and the skinny

 

yes

 

i made some changes. the part in the red circle is needs to be changes somehow or removed completely, i cant decide

 

eww lol i removed it and it didnt looked right i just wanna make it like the s and the a connected or so

 

just letting you know



also mawks is right, your style is pretty played.

 

i'm fully aware that there's a GS in *******. i was at an event and SPACE was trying to preach to me about it

but it's whatever, i dont care. as far as my style being "played out", i can only think of one other writer in my area that has a somewhat similar style. don't mistake this rant for "bitching", but please feel free to show me some examples of other writers with a similar style to backup your opinion. (i'm actually serious, i would like to see some examples, i'm not just trying to be all "fuck you guys blah blah ect ect..)

The other GS is from a completely different part of the country and is a freight head anyways, i hit walls. By all means if he actually did know i existed and had a problem then we'll cross that road when we cross that road.

 

This is dope,
and Robot Boy is what's up.

 

man u must be comfortable with ur letters for how many things u bust out i like the color scheme

 

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thanks guys, prob gonna do a char or background on this

 

looks good, id only fix the e , get rid of its bubble "head" and the thick bar extension at the bottom...

 

thanks for Crits mate, will keep working at it, only second Alter piece I have done!!
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duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.
That's dope as fuck.
The characters are placed a but randomly,
but other that that, it's fuckin clean.
You want to do an exchange, man?

 

yea ok what do you write, too lazy to look back and see haha