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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    lawl.

    i'm curious tho, why, in your opinion should i scrap my style?



    btw dude, i've seen ur stuff and you can barely do simps.
     
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  2. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  3. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    robot boy!niceley done is he gunna get into graff?
    i thought this sketch was alright when i looked at it
    afarm3.static.flickr.com_2496_3984137678_8989a53654.png
     
  4. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    get rid of that squiggly extension off the A
     
  5. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    which part the skinny or the big? the bigs a part of the t's spade but i guess k
     
  6. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    the skinny

    and the top bar of the T needs to be fatter to match the rest
     
  7. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    k so theright part of the t and the skinny
     
  8. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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  9. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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  10. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    i made some changes. the part in the red circle is needs to be changes somehow or removed completely, i cant decide
     

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  11. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    eww lol i removed it and it didnt looked right i just wanna make it like the s and the a connected or so
     
  12. Abor Rudest

    Abor Rudest Senior Member

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  13. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    i'm fully aware that there's a GS in *******. i was at an event and SPACE was trying to preach to me about it

    but it's whatever, i dont care. as far as my style being "played out", i can only think of one other writer in my area that has a somewhat similar style. don't mistake this rant for "bitching", but please feel free to show me some examples of other writers with a similar style to backup your opinion. (i'm actually serious, i would like to see some examples, i'm not just trying to be all "fuck you guys blah blah ect ect..)

    The other GS is from a completely different part of the country and is a freight head anyways, i hit walls. By all means if he actually did know i existed and had a problem then we'll cross that road when we cross that road.

    :D
     
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  14. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    This is dope,
    and Robot Boy is what's up.
     
  15. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    man u must be comfortable with ur letters for how many things u bust out i like the color scheme
     
  16. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  17. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    looks good, id only fix the e , get rid of its bubble "head" and the thick bar extension at the bottom...
     
  18. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    thanks for Crits mate, will keep working at it, only second Alter piece I have done!!
    added chars

    View attachment 514846
     
  19. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.
    That's dope as fuck.
    The characters are placed a but randomly,
    but other that that, it's fuckin clean.
    You want to do an exchange, man?
     
  20. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    yea ok what do you write, too lazy to look back and see haha