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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    its not BAD, but work with your proportions more.
     
  2. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Someone ask what Im workin with today so here. Nothin good :( just bitting, cause I can do shit

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    ^^^^Simp for Seyo


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    ^^^Some stuff in the book
     
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  3. slipyslipyslipymegeee

    slipyslipyslipymegeee Senior Member

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    i like it but theres to much stuff going on in the fill
     
  4. ChadWarden

    ChadWarden Elite Member

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    nah, the fill is sick in my opinion. only thing is you have waaay too many arrows. to the point were it looks retarded.

    but different people have different tastes, so do what you're feeling.
     
  5. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    hoer - sick. like the fill.
    viruz - some good letters, some not as good. keep er up.
    eng - bars more consistent pls. and id say toy forum for now.

    pencil lines were possible extensions.
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  6. STFUPPERCUT

    STFUPPERCUT Senior Member

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    Bummmmp! for crits!



    sike- your throws are pretty decent man i lie kthe color combo on the 2nd

    hoer- looks good jsut seems lie kthe ends went a lil over board with arrows.

    Zome- your definatly improoving bud but this thread still aint fro you.

    viruz- i dont really like the seyo perice but the othere 3 pages are tastey

    epoc- tjhat other shit i see in penic should be added, tweak the I, and i think it will look pretty good do post when u finish it
     
  7. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    lier
     
  8. .nolove.

    .nolove. Senior Member

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    i like the over all form of the letters.i just think it needs something to take up that negative space you got their.but the add ons your going with just aint working imo.
     
  9. cocacola

    cocacola Senior Member

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    the lil burner i wuz wurkin on
     
  10. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    Yo son you aint hurd? aint a burner unless that biatch do be havin over like 10 arrowz ! ! real talk.



    SIZE keep doing exactly what youre doing that thangs nice.

    SATRA? - as a whole its alright but the letters need to be tweaked.
     
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  11. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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    stfuppercut > I cant read the thing above the chick, to blurry better pic maybe?
    epoc > good idea of not outlining those extentions yet, dont outline them because they dont look good.
    Other wise I like the letters.
    cocacola > its clean im just not feelin the letters.

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  12. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    I how you guys skip me...I WANT CRITS MO FOS
     
  13. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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    Just seen that exchange you did for me, I like it but the middle of the o confuses me. ;D
    Also some of your widths are way to small compared to the thick parts. Fatten up them small bars a tiny bit.
    Oh yea i usually only crit the page I post on, to lazy to check the other pages.
     
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  14. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    I confuse myself sometimes :D lol I didnt know what to do for a O and its like my 1st time back to the paper in a while lol Ill work on it
     
  15. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    oh ya SOS im liking the letters, they look kinda like my dude GENRE.
     
  16. LOPe_GCI

    LOPe_GCI Senior Member

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    seyor- dam holmes the S an the R in that bottom piece are real real nice. def keep goin wit that style i could see that turnin into somethin real fresh. thats def the best shit i seen from u by a mile
     
  17. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    seyo - both are nice nice! sweet to see you breaking your boundaries. as for crit. i dont like dollar S. and your bottom E kinda weird feeling. def sick work though. keep up. (hehe remember these days? http://www.bombingscience.com/graffitiforum/showthread.php?p=1207762#post1207762)

    coco - wat hoer said.

    tried squeezing everything closer. removed extensions for now....i have trouble with em, i can never get them to actually add to the piece as appose to clutter it.

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  18. Queezy

    Queezy Elite Member

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    Hand exchange anyone?
     
  19. STFUPPERCUT

    STFUPPERCUT Senior Member

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    m+s- lay off the amphetamines ;]
     
  20. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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