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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    haha damn, what a waste of a dope piece and some mt dew!!
     
  2. SHER_WON_WTS

    SHER_WON_WTS Senior Member

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  3. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    zoner- I have a good feeling that once you get a little cleaner you are just going to destroy your hood with freshness.

    earn- if you use a base fill color instead of leaving the letters white on the inside, that kind of fill can look sexy. for instance put yellow behind orange circles, or light blue behing dark blue etc. and wasting dew and a sketch is just pure bad luck.

    anyways, heres a big 22" by 28" poster i did, half of it isnt even rly graff, but i still got the urge to post this here to get some overall crits. cuz all that most ppl i know will tell me is that its "interesting", fucking hate that crit...

    View attachment 545767

    edit: i know i got lazy at the bottom cuz i did it at 5 in the morning and it was due the next day...
     
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  4. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    you had to have been rolling fucking balls when you did that

    most of the letters in there lack style, except for one of the E's. how long did that take you..and...why??!
     
  5. SHER_WON_WTS

    SHER_WON_WTS Senior Member

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    its pretty awesome, like alphabetical vomit. (in a good way)
     
  6. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    actually i didnt do any kinds of drugs during that one. its the way my brain works i guess...

    and i did it for some contest thingy that was more art oriented than graff, and since the judges wont be graff heads, i cared more about overall look than the individual letters (my normal style is kinda like a mix of the green E with the face and the first WE at the top left). just put it up here to see what a graff head would say.

    and it took probs around 40 hours total, but honestly if you consider the size and what some of my other "art" art took in time, thats almost nothing for me.

    and thx sher
     
  7. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    you messed up the pirat, his limbs are all screwed..overall its very colorful..and interesting..i couldnt even do that on crack or something..
     
  8. Alts13

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  9. Noz

    Noz Senior Member

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    i like the top 1, nd tha bottom 1 hella tough though
     
  10. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    looks somewhat like the cloudmaker on top of the mountain of the thousand(spikyish) faces...
     
  11. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    thanks guys for giving some type of good crits or just being positive. im just gonna stop using this site though still bc theres just no need for all the bitching on here. ill ost a few piks i guess once in awhile but im gonna move to pure graffiti bc the peeps there r pretty cool an dont all have something stuck up there ass. peace.
     
  12. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    alts that fill is fucking intense bro. is that supposed to be like a four elements themed fill? cause the E looks earthy, the A like air, the K fire, and i can kinda see how the O could be water. or did it just happen to come out that way?
     
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  13. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    yea I kinda went with that as a theme for it, glad someone noticed haha

    coloured this
    View attachment 545797
     
  14. m+s

    m+s Senior Member

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    this one has promise, all i can say is that your letters are seriously lacking in flow. your style kind of reminds me of untold with all the drastic angles and lack of curves, if i were you, i would loose any bars not completely neccesary to the letter structure and work on making them flow right. oh and bar width congruency is way over rated.
     
  15. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    wat do u mean by bar width congruency?
     
  16. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    it means your bars dont need to be perfectly even and shit. make some curves in there somewhere.
     
  17. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  18. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    not a big fan of that E but the rest is legit
     
  19. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    ur copying meanmug lol he did it first!
     
  20. SEEK NRA

    SEEK NRA Senior Member

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    nice work alts. are you on vacation or somethin? cause uv been busy as shit