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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. funhouseXcast

    funhouseXcast Elite Member

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    i listen to aesop all the time and i don't even smoke and I still trip on the shit he says.
     
  2. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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  3. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    not really feeling that style
     
  4. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    eskimo- heat.
    esoe- i got a homie over here that writes esoe, keep developing that style.

    some bullshit.
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  5. pleasedontstayr

    pleasedontstayr Senior Member

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    alts just fucking murdered that page.
     
  6. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    i feel like duke killed it more.....and what
     
  7. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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  8. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    STILL need to fix those E's.
     
  9. RES4

    RES4 Elite Member

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    i think the s is worse
     
  10. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Esoe, I think you need to worry more about your letters then callin people out and tellin em to go to the toy thread. Cause the same thing could be said for you.


    out of town and have no colors.
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  11. DukeOne

    DukeOne Moderator

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    Haha Blunted

    I don't know why you guys are so hard on Esoe, the kids got style and some flair, and in that last sketch i finally see some progress being made. Res4 i really don't anything wrong with that S...

    Esoe if you took the top section of your Es (< This Part) and rotated it even 10 degrees to the left it would work a lot better. Just my 2 cents
     
  12. KillzOne

    KillzOne Member

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    Your simps are love or hate IMO but they are better than 98% of the shit that is gettin postin in the bonk thread
     
  13. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    eskimo - good sjit man im feelin it
    bilnek - niceshit man its nice to see you do something else but id like to see you try somethig outiside your comfort zone man
    clout, nice somps but id like to seeem you do something diffierent for a change

    haha sorry for the drunkin cits dudes, gnight
     
  14. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    View attachment 565415

    still no colors :/
    tried somthing wit the e's but that ain't what i wan't....so ill post stuff wit these letters untill i fix em
     
  15. dangeri

    dangeri Elite Member

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    I like the general idea of those e's bud, all of that style (with varios tweaks) are nice, I like the s from the blue one above more, but it's the o's I'm not too keen on, like your style overall tho man, good shit!
     
  16. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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  17. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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  18. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Nice Pig character bro
     
  19. dave the pirate

    dave the pirate Senior Member

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  20. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Esoe on the green peice, the second E is way hidden and needs to come out more right. The S might look better if you add a another bar at the top of it to help kill some of that negative space. And your arrows are coming out of completely nowhere. It helps the flow of the peice if you can find a way to make them break off from the letters instead of coming from behind them or whatever theyre doing, as if it was all connected. you know what im trying to say?

    Here - The top half of the second E needs to lean more right. It would help the balance and kill some of the negative space over there. Also in accordance with what Guyer said in the toybb that shit will look legit.

    Okae - I still say lose the arrows, but for the letters, The K needs the most work. The right leg of the A needs to swing out some more to the right cause right now it just looks all smushed.



    Oh...and did anyone wanna do an exchange maybe? and possibly knock it out tonight?