that bottom kick on that 3rd K looks liek a machete blade, forreal. put the top bar of the 3rd K into the bottom bar aka make connect, dont place em on top of each other like that
Those kinda look like ball sacks hanging from your first picture and I think your asking for redicule on the streets with a name like that.
What? That last comment made no sense. Having a dumb name is setting yourself up for fast ridicule with other writers in your hood.
moan isnt really a stupid name, ive seen a lot worse. but mone has been writin since the 80s or some shit and is a new york style king. so i wouldnt use the name solely for that reason
its hard 2 be a 7thgrader View attachment 565764 sinkilla- first one is pretty ugly...remove the nutsacks from it and it would be nicer i dig the 2nd one...u have a nice style asper don't just do simples...try to do something more sometimes (tho your simps are good)
moan isnt a stupid name lol and yeah i know mone big head dont really care to much and the 1st one is a bad picture the nuts saks are so much better from far away
you should care, he's been doin his thing prolly before you were born. its a shame when you put in 20+ years of work an some kid comes an jocks your name like a punk. iunno, just how i feel. he may not care cuz he has better things goin on, but it looks wack in my eyes. my 2 cents anyways, work on the flow of your individual letters. the bars are too forced and the angles dont look that good. your second A could be mistake as an R because of how the A is bent. youre neglecting your O a lot, youre working on the other letters but your still rockin a straight circle, not much style or advancement there in comparison to the other letters. try using the right side of your M in reverse style on the left as well. its half developed in my eyes, keep workin on it. your not that bad
ehh the letters are ok i guess didnt put to much time into it im geussin but its straight just keep fuckin with the letters a lil more
no i care i didnt jok his name i had no clue until i looked up the name moan and i saw mone didnt really think much the same
I dont really like that kinda style although it looks cool. I like the oldschool legible simple ish. I see where your going and it looks cool but its getting kinda hip and illedgible in some areas. I cant really read it. All i can see is tom-b/z/e -ter. Just keep working at that style if its what you wanna do and itill develope, theres nothing I can really crit cept for just keep working at it, its not bad but its not amazing.
its funny that you say that, because i feel the need to tell you to make your letters less generic...
the A's fine. the M and the S need to be fixed. here's a really crude idea of what i would do to fix it... [Broken External Image]:http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/3636/picture3nh.png
your S is buggin the fuck out, it looks like a B or something. other than that, its real dope an the letters are bangin here, perhaps you may liek this [Broken External Image]:http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/9219/tomasf.png an the little Z in the M is kinna wierd. but dosent really disguise the letters too much