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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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    that bottom kick on that 3rd K looks liek a machete blade, forreal. put the top bar of the 3rd K into the bottom bar

    aka make connect, dont place em on top of each other like that
     
  2. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    new shit
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  3. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Those kinda look like ball sacks hanging from your first picture and I think your asking for redicule on the streets with a name like that.
     
  4. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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  5. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    What? That last comment made no sense. Having a dumb name is setting yourself up for fast ridicule with other writers in your hood.
     
  6. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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    moan isnt really a stupid name, ive seen a lot worse. but mone has been writin since the 80s or some shit and is a new york style king.

    so i wouldnt use the name solely for that reason
     
  7. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    its hard 2 be a 7thgrader :D
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    sinkilla- first one is pretty ugly...remove the nutsacks from it and it would be nicer
    i dig the 2nd one...u have a nice style

    asper don't just do simples...try to do something more sometimes (tho your simps are good)
     
  8. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    moan isnt a stupid name lol and yeah i know mone big head dont really care to much and the 1st one is a bad picture the nuts saks are so much better from far away :)
     
  9. Watfe

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  10. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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    you should care, he's been doin his thing prolly before you were born. its a shame when you put in 20+ years of work an some kid comes an jocks your name like a punk.

    iunno, just how i feel. he may not care cuz he has better things goin on, but it looks wack in my eyes. my 2 cents

    anyways, work on the flow of your individual letters. the bars are too forced and the angles dont look that good. your second A could be mistake as an R because of how the A is bent. youre neglecting your O a lot, youre working on the other letters but your still rockin a straight circle, not much style or advancement there in comparison to the other letters. try using the right side of your M in reverse style on the left as well. its half developed in my eyes, keep workin on it. your not that bad
     
  11. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    watfe thats fresh :D :D
    wanna exchange?
     
  12. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    ehh the letters are ok i guess
    didnt put to much time into it im geussin but its straight just keep fuckin with the letters a lil more
     
  13. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    no i care i didnt jok his name i had no clue until i looked up the name moan and i saw mone didnt really think much the same
     
  14. Watfe

    Watfe Member

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    uh redo
     
  15. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    I dont really like that kinda style although it looks cool. I like the oldschool legible simple ish. I see where your going and it looks cool but its getting kinda hip and illedgible in some areas. I cant really read it.
    All i can see is tom-b/z/e -ter.

    Just keep working at that style if its what you wanna do and itill develope, theres nothing I can really crit cept for just keep working at it, its not bad but its not amazing.
     
  16. Watfe

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  17. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    I kinda see it now, just tone down the hip abit in the A and S. Looks good though.
     
  18. Watfe

    Watfe Member

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    its funny that you say that, because i feel the need to tell you to make your letters less generic...
     
  19. AteskOne

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  20. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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