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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
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when i think outside the box good things happen
freek- i like your stuff...just make some parts of your letters a little bit more fat...it would look better
squint- i love you man...wanna exchange?
duke-maan toy bb
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Bump... any crits ?
resin from MA???
Tofe- Your working with bars but there all outta wack. Work on letter flow. They should all have a simmiler lean and tilt. The word sould flow, It just seems your sticking bars everywitch direction, Keep some bars horizontial to balence things out, I wouldent say its intermediate quite yet. s good example of basic letter flow is Redeyes stuff.
Redeyes- Just keep on working your style out, you got the fundamentals of lettering, now you just gotta make it your own and comeup with idea's
Youth- Not really my style so im not gonna crit.
Evil- Loose the connections and addons, I think what you need to work on is widening some of your bars up, and working with other styles. Not to say that style you have isent good but i think you could progress your style by dedicating to learn other shit and taking stuff from other styles.
I've been seeing you up alot over the past couple months props on the work.
Bilnek. I think if you tweaked the general look of the stles to more flowey and a softer letter forum it would turn out dope. I'll sketch some shit up for you in abit.
Deco-one- To many styles to look through, its going for you but i would suggest trying to work on specific styles, some of the letters dont match up to well on some of the sketches and takes away from the over aestetics of the peice.
I'm pretty high so sorry if my crits are worthless ahaha
deco one your letters are ok but try picking a style and go from there
these last couple of pages are dope...
quick sketch the 1st bar of my M is a lil thin tho..
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bumpin myself cuz i like crits ^^
meko that is awesome cept that little black lines....i don't know they just distract me from the sketch...but overall the sketch is awesome
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meko for the win. i love no 3-D, but it would look awesome with a huge outline and a big ass drop shadow.
I hate to sound like the mean guy who says it but seriously, some of you dudes constantly ask for crits but never actually work to improve your stuff, Its getting annoying seeing the same sketch posted over and over just to have the exact same thing posted a week later in a different color.
cough cough ... tofe,,
Crits? I'll GTFO, if i need to.
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Haha i like how the i is topped of with a diamond
I see promise in that U and E.
Honestly. I think theres a point where crits are not longer applicable. Where one's style and skill must progress on there own, to attain any form of originality.
Tofe & Ikue - No hate, but maybe the toy bb section would be a better place to improve atm
Exchange with Virus, went with Zaner. Kinda an experimental piece, not completely happy it it, I really should have focused on the letters more to help ya out, but hopefully you still enjoy it.
Taking a bit of a break from exchanges, to work on my own stuff for a while -
Im almost done with your.....Just inking it right now. I'll post it up tomorrow when I get off of work . Thanks HOmmie dope shit
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baah....pussy pink exchange wit squint
yeah dude no 3d'd stuuff looks sick..i went paintin with this old school cat and i just watched him paint and took alot of mental notes, and he didnt rock a 3d so i asked him why no 3d, and he laughed and said 3Ds are played out, im changin it up cuz all graff these days looks the same....
exactly, what happens in this day and age is that a lot of dudes don't have letters down, but they try and throw all this other shit (extensions, highlights, 3-d) on their pieces to make up for that fact. if someone can paint a straight letter that is truly stylin', i'd rather look at that for days rather than see some more unreadable west coast "looking like they are going to strangle me" pieces.
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