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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
dope! keep em coming
Need some serious crits on this..its only the 1st sketch but i need ur guys 2 cents.
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as a drawing it is ok, the lips eyes and nose look weird to me though, as a tattoo design it is played out and doesn't work, I hate that ultra-realistic tattoo craze at the moment, those tattoos won't stand the test of time.
You should listen to the crits that were given they were completely spot on, and just because you study art doesn't mean it translates into tattoo design.
Edit, infact the more I look at it the more flaws I see, really needs work the chin is weird and the farside eye is really really bad, looks like someone has smacked her in the face.
Yeah I am what you write?
not you doggy i was talkin to someone else
This was such a mofo to get a picture of, glared a lot, so this was the best i could do. Found the character on the left in an old print and the one on the right from a sketch by Da Vinci, made quite a few changes to the originals however. Anyway I'm tired night night
what markers did u use???
btw try and paint some of your stuff
Well does anyone want to exchange?
ya, i was confused.
But i'm definitely down, prolly post it up in a few days.
Doing a Piece for my girl
crits so far?
Thats dope, but you should move the A over a bit to clear up negative space.
you have sweet letters. But you lack flow. your a is going one direction, but your g is point str8 up or down...Depending how you look at at it.
Try having you letters sway the same way you know. This might also help take out some dead space you have
That is probably the most helpful response I have come across on this web sit lol... Thanks bro yeah I really need to learn how to flow
i'd like to see you play with the bottom part of the e that's being overlapped. the rainbow curve is bothering me a bit
ithanks duke and sos,pmaybe you know me,maybe not.
Soo you can see what Im talking about better
Sorry didn't realize it was soo small. But yeah try to have your letters lean the same way. But their are certain circumstances in which you dont need to flow this rule, but for right now flow this rule..
Oh and reminder guys. Give Crits to get them
The only thing I see wrong with that Angie piece is the huge A.
A Simpy whimpy
^^^More forced stylized
Which one, crits
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