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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. PREA672

    PREA672 Elite Member

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    dope! keep em coming
     
  2. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Need some serious crits on this..its only the 1st sketch but i need ur guys 2 cents.
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  3. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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    as a drawing it is ok, the lips eyes and nose look weird to me though, as a tattoo design it is played out and doesn't work, I hate that ultra-realistic tattoo craze at the moment, those tattoos won't stand the test of time.

    You should listen to the crits that were given they were completely spot on, and just because you study art doesn't mean it translates into tattoo design.

    Edit, infact the more I look at it the more flaws I see, really needs work the chin is weird and the farside eye is really really bad, looks like someone has smacked her in the face.
     
  4. Spraycan Stories

    Spraycan Stories Senior Member

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    Yeah I am what you write?
     
  5. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    not you doggy i was talkin to someone else
     
  6. ravine

    ravine Senior Member

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  7. DukeOne

    DukeOne Moderator

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    This was such a mofo to get a picture of, glared a lot, so this was the best i could do. Found the character on the left in an old print and the one on the right from a sketch by Da Vinci, made quite a few changes to the originals however. Anyway I'm tired night night
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  8. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    what markers did u use???
    btw try and paint some of your stuff
     
  9. Spraycan Stories

    Spraycan Stories Senior Member

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    Well does anyone want to exchange?
     
  10. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    ya, i was confused.
    But i'm definitely down, prolly post it up in a few days.
     
  11. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Doing a Piece for my girl

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    Not finished
    crits so far?
     
  12. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Thats dope, but you should move the A over a bit to clear up negative space.
     
  13. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    you have sweet letters. But you lack flow. your a is going one direction, but your g is point str8 up or down...Depending how you look at at it.
    Try having you letters sway the same way you know. This might also help take out some dead space you have
     
  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    That is probably the most helpful response I have come across on this web sit lol... Thanks bro yeah I really need to learn how to flow
     
  15. luvsac

    luvsac Senior Member

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    i'd like to see you play with the bottom part of the e that's being overlapped. the rainbow curve is bothering me a bit
     
  16. otter

    otter Senior Member

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    ithanks duke and sos,pmaybe you know me,maybe not.
     
  17. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    ai49.tinypic.com_35aszg3.gif
    Soo you can see what Im talking about better
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    Sorry didn't realize it was soo small. But yeah try to have your letters lean the same way. But their are certain circumstances in which you dont need to flow this rule, but for right now flow this rule..

    Oh and reminder guys. Give Crits to get them
     
  18. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    The only thing I see wrong with that Angie piece is the huge A.
     
  19. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    A Simpy whimpy

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    ^^^More forced stylized

    Which one, crits
     
  20. xXABEONEXx

    xXABEONEXx Senior Member

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    i would..