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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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    found my old book, decided to re-do the first page, this is it so far, mom threw out my markers so it gonna stay like this till i rack some more.

    duke: i like the script style you are going w. but i want to see you push it even farther, that right now is good for tattoos but i bet you can do alot more.

    mone: the bit coming off the O makes it look like a C and the E doesnt flow bc of that bendy bar, but i like that style.

    ?: i like that esker exchange, it's different but in a good way.

    esk: i like your style, its not a new style but i dont really see it much so its nice to see people w. it. keep at it. good painting.

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  2. luvsac

    luvsac Senior Member

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    tre, what should i do to the top right part of the e?
    safe: those letters look good but extend the bottom part of the S that's going under more to the left and bring it out so it isnt being overlapped. and as for the A, thicken the curved bar. hope that wasnt confusing
     
  3. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  4. ..romero..

    ..romero.. Elite Member

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    mone..i like that thing you were doing on the wall///

    ai36.tinypic.com_210a9mo.jpg

    my contribution for the week.fuck-a-duck
     
  5. EsKoNeR!!

    EsKoNeR!! Elite Member

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    what do you mean not a new style?
     
  6. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  7. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Is thier still time to get down on this battle
     
  8. Alts13

    Alts13 Senior Member

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  9. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    that wars is the best ive seen from you WG

    alts lookin sick as always

    philip that character is dope lets see it finished

    trest its fresh but i liked it better without color

    esko thats a nice style

    no can control im diggin the flow but work on that n

    coca dope color combo
     
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  10. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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  11. NoCanControl

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  12. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    well what i mean is look at the last piece i did n see wat i mean with the e. . . something along those lines
     
  13. luvsac

    luvsac Senior Member

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  14. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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    well keep going. . unless thats the particular flow u r going for for ur piece?

    seyor - looks good
     
  15. BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK Banned

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    damn that sope shit is ugly, the letters need work
     
  16. DukeOne

    DukeOne Moderator

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    Thanks man, generally I just use a pencil

    Safe - Better man, your spacing is much much better than your previous work. The AF particularly has improved. But there are still some errors with the bottom legs of both the S and the E. Try thinking the bottom bar of the E. And extending the bottom bar or the S to the left.

    Cyto Aka Son1c - Feeling those letters man. Not crazy about the fill, the colours seem a bit too dull, but that could just be the photo.

    Alts - ma boy always coming with fire! Id like to somehow crit it, but...I'm not sure how lol

    Seyor - Looking pretty dope man, the OR seem a bit cluttered but I'm assuming you ran out of room on the page

    BLUNTEDROUNDTHACLOCK - Please be a bit more specific about that you don’t like, that way he can focus on improving those aspects

    Anyway just a quickie alphabet on an envelope

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  17. -Wings-

    -Wings- Senior Member

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  18. GuyGuyer of Guyland

    GuyGuyer of Guyland Senior Member

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  19. KESKone

    KESKone Senior Member

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    thats a hella sick quickie
     
  20. FlippingChickens

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