You're 3D looks weird too me. Something about it just looks inconsistent, and what the fuck is that thing under your sketch? Work on that thing, it's turrible!
naw man. no lie, first peice. im just not like all these other fucks who just jump into it. ive never been schooled by any one before, so i schooled myself. never touched a spray can for years. stayed in the blackbooks and learned my city's graff history. learned about etiquette.. those graff rules that arent written. what to go over with what [throwies over tags, simples over throwies/peices over throwies.. etc] dont write on churches, schools [heated], cemetaries, houses [unless beefin hardcore] etc.. and i learned where graffiti all started, its origins. how it came up, why people do it, compared to why i do it... theres just SO MUCH to learn before you grab that can, its incredible. and then you have toy fucks who just learn how to spell graffiti, and theyre grabbin a can. thats where a peice of this culture got fucked in the ass. learn before you burn. but thank you.
I tried to make my style a little bit more grimy this time around. Real quick sketch during class. [Broken External Image]:http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/4356/dsc02143s.jpg
im not feelin how the top of the C is so long.i think you should make it shorter.imo.the rest is cool tho.just the c needs a bit of work.
That's what they all say... Anyway, you have some style in there but to really use that you must go simpler.
I feel as if the letters could be sharper; more crisp - defined. The letter structure is good, but just straighten things up a bit.. The colors dont necessarily add anything good to it either. Fairly random to say the least.. Better than a lot I've seen. Just clean it up a little and practice.
are you serious? thats awful get rid of all those extentions, i mean seriously look at your m its drowning in shit