I didn't mean go simpler as much as lose the little folds and stuff at the ends of your bars. The basic letters aren't headed in a bad direction. I don't see the harm of messing with extensions even if you aren't quite ready for them to learn how they fuck wit the flow and take up negative space, but useless little complications in someones letter forms or outlines serve no purpose. Just my opinion. On that note: Aspek, always liked your style, sorta different than everyone elses angles an corners in here Somb, i'd lose the arrows and go simpler for a bit I feel the MERTA rat character and the fill, but not so much the letters, especially the E. Meyor looking solid View attachment 589659 and Meth View attachment 589660
j up do more work man. work on simples for a while and see what comes out of it focus on bars and lose the extensions...in the meantime...id keep it in the tots section
wasnt expecting to be able to paint. had like 8 cans all different colors had to do something and it was dark, excuses excuses
shoulda swapped the black for the outline and the blue for the filll. the black robs the attention and distracts you. know what im sayin?