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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Phaze One

    Phaze One Member

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    Im not takin it personal but I dont think its toy at all. lol the ones that say psyke are oldddd.
    Im not sayin im nasty either. Idk people`s opinion I guess
  2. 2ndsexwithoutcondoms

    2ndsexwithoutcondoms Member

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  3. ravine

    ravine Senior Member

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    i thought you were banished to the hills anyway?
  4. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    This thread died a long time ago...
  5. TastyMcNasty

    TastyMcNasty Elite Member

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  6. swae101

    swae101 Member

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    mone: super dope
    just quick exchange with soar crits?
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  7. Bilnek

    Bilnek Senior Member

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    skope nvm those bitchy bitches...only thing you need is a bit more flow and make it less complicated and you will do it good ;) keep postin in here and you get mine crits
    mone ur fills are awesome
    swae- u tried using an eraser?
  8. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    cant quite my cells a lil...
  9. FuckTheFame

    FuckTheFame Elite Member

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    @ swae - ill. your style must have taken a while to build
    Last edited: Jan 27, 2011
  10. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    God...I really don't understand what's going on in half of this thread.
    Buggin out on someone for using a quote?
    Kids talking like they fucking king of their city when they're trash?
    Boosting kids egos for no reasons?
    Come on...
    Mone, that fill is hot, but the letters don't really flow.
    Swae, that A is horrrrible. Fix that up, and work on the O and the bottom of the S.
    Fuck the Fame, the O is too thin, the Y is awkward, and the U is fatttt. The piece on the page back is bad. It has nooo flow. Idk what the first letter is either...
    Skope, do simples. Those are bad. Post in the Toy BB Thread.
    Ribcage, shut the fuck up. You don't know what you're talking about. You're in no position to give crits.
    Nose, shut the fuck up. It's a god damn quote. People quote shit all the time next to their pieces. Grow the fuck up.
    Plankton, lower your ego. You got good can control, but your letters are weakkkk.
    Baite, define your letters more. Your pencil is mad light. Can't tell what it's supposed to be.
    Homer, the one on the chick in jeans is nice. The one on the chick in the black pants is eh. The O and E are weak. Overall though, good shit.
    Ravine, the way you connect the top loop and bottom loop of your B (or top loop and leg on your R) is really weird. You have it where both bars are coming out of the backbone individually, and overlapping a little. They should flow into each other to create a single bar. If you don't get what I mean, I'll make some shit on MS Paint to show you. On the first one, watch your widths, and the bottom of your A is fucked up. Second, again, the bottom right of your A is weird, and the L doesn't really flow. If you're going to have the backbone like that, make the backbone of all the letters like that. The third is kinda bad. It doesn't flow, and feels really...generic. 4th is just...weird.
    Phaze, do simples. You got cool fills and all, but your letters are pretty bad.
    SicK, not too bad, but not too good either. just work on it.

    That's everyone on the last 3 pages critted.
    Pen freebie for a battle on AMA. The N is too fat and the extension going into the middle is wack, but I'll fix that when I sketch it out. The bottom of the S is weird, too much dead space, but again, I'll fix it when I sketch it out. Few other small problems I need to fix. I think it has some potential.
  11. kringe

    kringe Senior Member

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    That S and P are atrocious.
  12. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    yeah, i just do whatever i feel like....atrocious is the new awesome.
  13. idk401

    idk401 Senior Member

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    Heres your exchange MONE ...ohh and good shit mine is kinda sloppy my bad.
  14. 1ok

    1ok Member

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  15. idk401

    idk401 Senior Member

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    havent posted much heres what ive been up to.
  16. bait

    bait Senior Member

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    yo cats tell me a better server cause this is clearly a dying dinosaur which has been striken by disease called "toys"
    no but seriously this has been the only tread wat kept me going here on bs,but now it hurts my eyes to watch this shit wish i would ve joined earlier back in dem glory days,when grass was green and sun was bright.....
    n if any of u have beef shit with me come bitches,im in dem mood
  17. weedeater

    weedeater Senior Member

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    bait, its just a website bro, you have a sick style, go out and paint that shit and dont worry about people seeing your sketches when 99% of them will never drive through your city anyway.
  18. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Haha dope man thanks... I like the colors... I will make you a piece right quick
  19. Trestoner707

    Trestoner707 Senior Member

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  20. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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