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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
Lame throwie posts, just wanted to hop on the page...
pen freestyle: lifes not a bitch lifes a beautiful woman you only call her a bitch cause she wont let you get that pussy - aesop rock
Have not sketched in a while, crits on the new shit?
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Some good shit on this site. Props!
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^lose the extensions and work on outlining your letters cleaner, looks like stephen hawking did that shit for you.
crits for everyone on the last page
MONE- the p is too tilted, extension in U is bogus, the top right bar of your K doesnt flow (apparently Im the only person who says this every single time you do a K lol.) the 3-d could use some work too.
STUCK- good shit. The second E isnt that great, middle bar especially. Lovin that R. the bottom of the E and S where they overlap dont rally flow together
TEZER- DOOOPE! lovin that funky fill and that Z is fire
NOESR- Good shit bro. The canvas is ill so is the painted piece, sick can control. The O on the painted one could be connected better at the bottom, it just looks a lil strange like that
GRAE- the first flic is dope do more shit like that. Not feelin the other two as much
BRAINS- loving all that except the green one. The I and S on the first sketch are sick nasty bro. Your throws are dope too especially the way you do your O's
CLOUT- dope. the A seems a little stiff compared to the other letters but thats just my opinion
SWEA- something about your stuff makes me think youre biting, but ehh i gots no proof. The w needs the most work. The rest of the letters structure is aight but they come out lookin sloppy from the outline
RESN- nice little simples but please dont write resn just google that shit dude
ok im not intermediate but lemme get some crits please
couldnt fit this all on my scanner, looks a lot better as a whole lol
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somber, you seem like a unconsistant drawer, im geussing just because i feel like you progress then dun-progress lol
try being more consistant cuz your letters aint to great on that last sketch ive seen better from you
that top jabka is dopeeee
SEZER-drop a shadow
PEKINS-try experimenting a bit...everything is the same...and ugly
SANC-you have good potential
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Pekins start posting in the Toy black book thread you know that your pics do not belong here and you have even said it yourself lol...
YO Esoe that top one man! It looks great keep improving that style man...
@Jabka: I dig that first pic good shit...
Esoe i feel like ive seen all of those pics before, your style is so dope but i think you should try some different stuff
Nooo... Just keep doing what you are doing and improve that style
keep doin but atleast post new shit
fuck hsve seriosly been not feeling my shit lately nor the colors nor the outline
started this but idk if ill finish
do u use watercolor, bait? and how long does it take you on an average to finish coloring a piece like this one on blackbook, and how long does it take you to finish it on wall if you paint walls
i use copics
if im not lazy i can do it real fast like 20-30 min(this piece) n if i kno how i want to color it
uhhh i unfortunately dont paint much
fails on me
shit dude, 30 mins to do THIS coloring job? I say that's impressive dude, such a shame you dont paint much. you could wreck shit :\ big props man keep it up
its like id paint im not scared of getting caught n shit but i never seem to find a spot
respect bait your skill is awesome is there anything specific you did to help build your pieces when you first started?
uhh idk not doing simps i guess
cool was just wondering if there was anything specific that helped you... I just gotta buy my time n practice
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