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^nice S, e needs work though. I like that R in your tag btw

 

1ok... your ish before was better... thats pretty weak...
Ryet... fresh out the kitchen like kfc fried chicken
face... that throwie is hot fire... love that style

 

yeah,i dont honestly write anymore.
...so letters are lacking,it's not cool :[

 

^def should not be in here
when are you going to take everyones advice and stop doin wack ass extensions and shit? it would look much better

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some wack shit for the throw battle

 

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may I put this in here?
its an attempt at a step further from my usual straight letter sketches.
do you guys think I'm moving in the right direction?
crits are highly apreciated thanks.

 

I'd say yes, but what do I know. Only thing I have a problem with is the E. And I think it covers the S a little too much. Cool fill.

 

yea the R in ur sketch for this was dopeshit... but didnt translate to the wall very well, still i like the fill and letters for the most part, glad to see u going over the old hoer stuff ;-) and the shoutout to bs.com lol nice touch

btw this is like the only pic in the last few pages that should be in here, sry guise

 

phat i like the fill and all the stuff goin on but i think your seriff's and shit are just to enormous and they take away from your letters , and you want the tfrrt piece pm'ed over to you got mine done will post it here later.

 

you know, just send it to me in pm, mine's ready too. its the final round, we dont wanna give the big sketches away huh ?

 

gotcha , i won't post it but send me yours in a pm so i can get a look at the competition....good luck man

here is a ten minute one for the toy sketch battle

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some ish for some chick

 

yeah dude thats not bad. im likin the purple

 

...i think you kids saying "you dont belong here" to people,in the toy forum,need to experience writing pass the internet.imo.
wgone-im feeling your simples.
...before anyone says it,yes,my letters have gone down hill,i'm working on getting them back lol.

 

theres a reason theres a toy and an intermediate thread buddy

 

Uhhh,it's just pointless to break things down between toy and intermediate,then put kids on blast for it.
Maybe having to be sober just makes me over think dumb shit.Lol.
any way old flicks for talking.

 

...i'm not feeling the knot extention between the z and n,the arrow on the bottom of the e,or the extention off your n that turns into an arrow.I also don't like the random dots and quotations.Structure wise,everything looks good,the z could use a little tweaking.

 

unfinished buisness