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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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  2. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Way to much space between each letters phat... and you have too much going on in it... I like how your Z came out looking... I do not like any of your extensions
     
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  3. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Y Nerdz piece for talk
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  4. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  5. weedeater

    weedeater Senior Member

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    photoshop cs5 to be exact, on his windows machine
     
  6. extinct

    extinct Senior Member

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    phat- the r to z connection is spot on
     
  7. ChronicKush

    ChronicKush Member

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    For Wilbur Exchange..Any Crits?
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  8. Shade.1

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    Yes, he's right. Sketch,camera,cs5 and tablet:cool:
     
  9. Sanc_one

    Sanc_one Senior Member

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  11. DoucheBag

    DoucheBag Senior Member

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    jabka-your style is pure tits dude im loving it.Trying to get down with an exchange??
    wilbur-your going in the right direction with your structure,keep at the simples.
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    for a battle that never got posted.
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    trying to get my letters back,first try at anything in along time,idk.
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    retard fill lol.
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  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    I like that top piece you did Douchbag... That skull is wack...
     
  13. DoucheBag

    DoucheBag Senior Member

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    ...idk,i always liked cartoony charac bombs,it's just a reworked old idea
    this is the orginal
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  14. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    a Possible logo for a Thai cuisine Restaurant T-shirts...
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  15. ribcage

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    ^The I isnt all the recognizable
     
  16. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    I like the cartoony skull, Okaer. I see it done HUGE in paint on a lot of walls. handle that shit. and Mone, that I is way too hidden. Get rid of the curls, they fuck up your flow, but in the sense that they create false flow and take up negative space that should be filled with letter structure. the MY is too crowded compared to the THA, and the T's point at the bottom looks strange compared to the rest of the piece.
     
  17. DoucheBag

    DoucheBag Senior Member

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    Just a shitty outline.
     

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  18. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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  19. 1ok

    1ok Member

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    sanc- so sick man.
    mone- as everyone else said the i is to hidden.
    okaer- on the last piece id get rid of those bar things on the o and a.
    chonic- id make your w bigger and lose the top extensions of it add more drips to the bottom but as you said its just an exchange.
    tasty- the top sketch has potential the s is dope maybe try to shrink your letters down instead of making em so tall and then give them some thickening up.

    i fixed the t so it doesnt look like an e as well and i think my r should be fixed but yee crit if ya want.
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    gunna color as well
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  20. DoucheBag

    DoucheBag Senior Member

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    1ok-i cant tell what any of the letters between the o and s are supposed to be!!

    I'm not liking this one very much,im not liking any of my letters lately :[
     

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