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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.
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says SAME diff style then normal the otherone said sunny i did it in like 10 min so its shitty but whateva crits?
weakfingers try to keep all ur letters bars the same width
nice lookin page so far , here's one for the toy battle
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crit my rr piece.
wgone- im glad u aint come at me with summn like that for tha rr lol shit is bangin, a few lil things i could point out could be that the u kinda looks like an a with the arrow, should have rounded the bottom. ur letters are evolving nice though
stigma- use ur crit n they would both look alot better
squint- some of the bar widths are a lil too extreme but overall it looks fresh. all ur effects are spot on
stuck- real dope, ur shit is evolving super nice. that simer piece reminds me of serius, just straight solid style.
fursure ill work on one tmmrw that takes a while both were pen freestyles bored at work
Wgone... Honestly thought it read rhgs... The b bottom should be closed and the u clearly is not a u
that would be the ugliest r ever dude wouldn't have p[osted it if it was supposed to be an r , and the u well it's a u
like i said mang, u shouldve rounded the bottom left of the u, the rest of the letters have a rounded part
new peice in my book.
wgone thats looking ill man .
squint the wall u rocked on the last page was insane with the shadow
stuck i like that crome simple its dope. and that fill in stuck and simer look fresh to
no <3 for me? you ducks
bilnek - haha naw what i posted wasmt for u,it was for someone else..that 7th and 8th picture is fire! that last picture aint bad either..characters are on point
seywhat - nice flow and color skeme but i would have liked it if the letters were all the same size
wgone - thats dope,i think the 'u' looks fine as it is
squint - it came out clean ,but i dont like it
krok - dope shit
stuk - dopeee
the silent one - i dont like the middle of your 's" and your e should be extended more imo
stigma - ive seen better from you..i like that "unn" but not that "s" and "Y" there not as flowy as the other letters
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^ another exchange
stuck, gone and bilnek all fresh. that blue bilnek with green is real nice. and the stucks are well done.
few workplace dooodles....
3d's super wack on this one, got a little crispy on lunch.
stuck- shits fresh keep it up.
faie?- its pretty cool but i dont like the two bars in the middle of you I like i think one would go better since all the other letters have 1 bar in the middle
squint- fresh fresh clean clean
stigma- the sunny doesnt look that good. but the Same goes hard. that shit is dope
wgone- like said before its dope, but the U kinda looks like an A, so connect the bottom and make the arrow not as big or dont put an arrow at all.
seywhat- i like how the B N and R match and theres 2 smaller letters after the B and N but i cant really tell what the letter after the N is. is it A or D?
kroc- i like it funky fresh fill meng
Bilnek- your school has some talent, bet those things would look dope in BB's why are they all on lined papper lmao. but fuck it its still dope
flippingchickens- its clean. the S goes hard but it looks liek your tried to hard on the H and the U doesnt look like a U to me it looks like a L I, but the T is dope too.
stigma(again)- it looks not as clean as it should bee and some of the bars are un-proportioned. it looks like
hal.cyon- im liking it even if the 3d is wacked
now for mine
oh and yes the 2nd letter is a E not a U before people say it doesnt look like a U lol. cuz its and E
bilnek wanna exchange?
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sure man wadda you write?
i wrote slotr what do you write
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