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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. The Silent One

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  2. Stuck

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  3. The Silent One

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  4. weakfingers

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  5. Stigma02

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    says SAME diff style then normal the otherone said sunny i did it in like 10 min so its shitty but whateva crits?
    weakfingers try to keep all ur letters bars the same width
     

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  6. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    nice lookin page so far , here's one for the toy battle

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  7. seywhat

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    crit my rr piece.

    wgone- im glad u aint come at me with summn like that for tha rr lol shit is bangin, a few lil things i could point out could be that the u kinda looks like an a with the arrow, should have rounded the bottom. ur letters are evolving nice though
    stigma- use ur crit n they would both look alot better
    squint- some of the bar widths are a lil too extreme but overall it looks fresh. all ur effects are spot on
    stuck- real dope, ur shit is evolving super nice. that simer piece reminds me of serius, just straight solid style.
     
  8. Stigma02

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    fursure ill work on one tmmrw that takes a while both were pen freestyles bored at work
     
  9. extinct

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    Wgone... Honestly thought it read rhgs... The b bottom should be closed and the u clearly is not a u
     
  10. W_G_O_N_E

    W_G_O_N_E Elite Member

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    that would be the ugliest r ever dude wouldn't have p[osted it if it was supposed to be an r , and the u well it's a u
     
  11. seywhat

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    like i said mang, u shouldve rounded the bottom left of the u, the rest of the letters have a rounded part
     
  12. kroc_oner

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    new peice in my book.
    wgone thats looking ill man .
    squint the wall u rocked on the last page was insane with the shadow
    stuck i like that crome simple its dope. and that fill in stuck and simer look fresh to
     
  13. Bilnek

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    no <3 for me? you ducks :(
     
  14. FlippingChickens

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    bilnek - haha naw what i posted wasmt for u,it was for someone else..that 7th and 8th picture is fire! that last picture aint bad either..characters are on point

    seywhat - nice flow and color skeme but i would have liked it if the letters were all the same size

    wgone - thats dope,i think the 'u' looks fine as it is

    squint - it came out clean ,but i dont like it

    krok - dope shit

    stuk - dopeee

    the silent one - i dont like the middle of your 's" and your e should be extended more imo

    stigma - ive seen better from you..i like that "unn" but not that "s" and "Y" there not as flowy as the other letters

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  15. hal.cyon

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    stuck, gone and bilnek all fresh. that blue bilnek with green is real nice. and the stucks are well done.

    few workplace dooodles....

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    3d's super wack on this one, got a little crispy on lunch.

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  16. proNYNJA

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    stuck- shits fresh keep it up.
    faie?- its pretty cool but i dont like the two bars in the middle of you I like i think one would go better since all the other letters have 1 bar in the middle
    squint- fresh fresh clean clean
    stigma- the sunny doesnt look that good. but the Same goes hard. that shit is dope
    wgone- like said before its dope, but the U kinda looks like an A, so connect the bottom and make the arrow not as big or dont put an arrow at all.
    seywhat- i like how the B N and R match and theres 2 smaller letters after the B and N but i cant really tell what the letter after the N is. is it A or D?
    kroc- i like it funky fresh fill meng
    Bilnek- your school has some talent, bet those things would look dope in BB's why are they all on lined papper lmao. but fuck it its still dope
    flippingchickens- its clean. the S goes hard but it looks liek your tried to hard on the H and the U doesnt look like a U to me it looks like a L I, but the T is dope too.
    stigma(again)- it looks not as clean as it should bee and some of the bars are un-proportioned. it looks like
    hal.cyon- im liking it even if the 3d is wacked

    now for mine :D
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    crits?
    oh and yes the 2nd letter is a E not a U before people say it doesnt look like a U lol. cuz its and E :D
     
  17. 1ok

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  18. Bilnek

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    sure man wadda you write?
     
  19. 1ok

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  20. Bilnek

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