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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. 4menace2society0

    4menace2society0 Banned

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    Ehh, I wouldn't say that my R looks the same, maybe similar, but then again it's mostly simple generic ish, it's just like building blocks, you keep adding on more and more til you make it your's, you feel me

    Anyway's this thread is looking like the tot book thread, too much chit chatin about nothing, go paint.
     
  2. SECH

    SECH Senior Member

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  3. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    @extinct shits a doodle/rough draft fo the round robin in my homies book... it prolly wont get finished unless he does it...the one I just did is pretty similar tho but im gonna wait to post it

    @sear detail in the fill is cool
    @peter you should definetly add 3d... and your hands are real bad... id go down to tot bb...
    @sech those are kinda cool 1st one looks better with the shoop, but the second one looks worse with the shoopedness
     
  4. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    DSC_9684.jpg DSC_9685.jpg DSC_9686.jpg

    So basically I said fuck it, didnt go back, just put more work into it next time, plus it rained like a motha fucka yesterday, any ways what yall think.
     
  5. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    the R looks like an A, and the U is hidden under the R... the U also kinda look like a V, but almost all U's do... The T is the best part.
     
  6. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    your right, those are the best crits I have ever gotten, I noticed the U when I was doing it, couldnt figure out a way to make it not hidden without the R being hidden the leg on the R could have been changed to look less like an A, and yes the T and E are my favorite parts thanks alot though.

    I feel like I notice everything that people notice right before them, and I want to change it but I cant, fuck, bad timing oh well. next time
     
  7. ribcage

    ribcage Banned

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    Did you sketch the outline out before you filled the letters in? You gotta manage your wall space. It looks like you had enough room to space out the letters slightly more, but not drastically cause other than the U being hidden the spacing on all the other letters are fine. But if you have a good amount of wall to work with, then use it.

    And I feel it, usually while painting or right after while im lookin it over I'll see things that I dont like, or that couldve been way better If I would have just slowed down and really took my time, but lack of paint doesnt allow me to go back and fix it. If you have time to paint and you have wall space, then use both as much as you can.

    flic for talk...even tho it aint graff
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  8. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    i agree with what ribcage had to say about brute.
    that dragon is better than any i can draw,but i would define the nails more and take off the hairs at the end of the tail and make the wings mad big.

    Bumping this .


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  9. Phat 2

    Phat 2 Elite Member

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    flipping chickens, how come your shit NEVER changes? don't you try new letters? new color combinations? new fucking styles? don't you get bored mofucka?
    all I've seen from you ever since I joined is the same page filled with the same bunch of pieces thrown in over each other in like a collage with little tags and throws scattered among them.
    and everytime you do, you get the same comments on them...
    what gives?
     
  10. toopski

    toopski Guest

    dragon looks good im not a fan of that style dragon myself more a japanese dragon guy as known by the tattoo on my back but yeah shits good
     
  11. Phillip McDougall

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  12. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    A piece that I am working on
     
  13. PETER

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    Still working on these letters. Trying to get them down and then muscle memory.
    greenblue.jpg thoughts/suggestions. I muffed up the T....
     
  14. IlikePie

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    It's boring. Too repetitive. And if you're going to do a piece like that, the T should be a bit bolder...
     
  15. 4menace2society0

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  16. PETER

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    a2.jpg thoughts on this? the A and N are a bit large, but I am looking for ideas to clean it up and colors and such. I'm going to re-do it and work on getting that A and N to match the k.
     
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  17. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I think you're trying too hard now. Go to the tot thread.
     
  18. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    do people ever listen, i love how people just dont give kids the time of day because they arent up to par on this thread, he didnt ask if he should be sent to the tot thread, he wants crist, i do agree its a little to complex looking for everything else you have been doing peter, but I like that your asking us for crits, thats how i did it. honestly, start off with the letters you have been doing, then build on those, make them more simple, get the bars and bends going, change up then worry about little extensions here and there, your fills are simple but work, and i kinda like keep at.
     
  19. MoganOne

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    This thread is not made for toys to get crits.... just saying
     
  20. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    no its not, its made for people who are intermediate and have potential to be great and stand in the ranks of the lookie lookie thread, and be given respect by almost all graff head who are on this sight, right now Mogan Peter had more potential then you, not because his letters are better but because hes expanding, and trying, you do the same fuckin letters all the time, never changes the only time they do is when you do a different word, and that word has an E in it, its the same fuckin E from before, you should be in the tot black book thread. so fuck off, learn some new letters.