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The Intermediate Thread

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by (SoS)Viruz, Mar 14, 2009.

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  1. Evow1

    Evow1 Senior Member

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    mori outline in black next time, that shit will pop like a virgins pussy on prom night.
     
  2. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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    My outer outline, the gel or aura depending on where your from
     
  3. Phillip McDougall

    Phillip McDougall Elite Member

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    YO SEAR, Your letters are going in the wrong direction homie... they're losing definition.
     
  4. Mori

    Mori Senior Member

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    ^your rocking it
     
  5. Tempo718

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    sear my re guards 2 tha chef, that plate was a masterpeice ;)
     
  6. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    everyone knows I hate Phillip, sorry, Truth. but this shit right ^^ there looking blobby, and phillip, what you said about Osek, YES! DOPE!!! love the flow, structure is good, not to complex not to simple, perfect.


    EDIT: SEAR: not trying to get you mad, its critique, thats what this thread is for to get better, going in the wrong direction happens, happened a bunch of times to me, you eventually get the feal for structure, yeah I know you gotta have flow when it comes to letters, and having flow and structure isnt always easy, but when you get structure down then flow comes with it. step by step homie. Its like the first time you peed in the toilet, forgot to flush but you didnt miss. (No Homo.)
     
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  7. MoganOne

    MoganOne Moderator

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    Keep puttin in work Sear you obviously know what you are doing bro
     
  8. ERES

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  9. 4menace2society0

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  10. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    I havent been here in awhile, going to crit everybody with the real talk.

    Edgar sanchez - i dont believe u painted that, if you did..then how is it possible you sketched so fucking wack? If you REALLY did paint that, then stick to sketching shit like what u paint.

    Sear - i dont get you man. Why do you say you dont care about what people say, then u post your shit? I mean bro, i got respect for you, but ill tell u straight up..that shit make no sence. I agree with you tho man, people on this shit are quick to talk shit, but why pay any mind to them, u know your painting and thats all that should matter to you. If these dorks dont understand that the letters your doing now are quicker to paint, then its a fact that they dont paint. Its fucking stupid that you pay attention to them,fuck em and do you, you have painted only 1 year. Im feeling your shit as usuall man, only crit is to change your hand up, that one page with your hands they all look the same and looks almost manipulated and not acctualy scribbled if u know what i mean, get a bunch of paper and go nuts with hands, you will eventually figure something else out.

    ruts - that deff looks like it saays " ruds" but i like it. i just dont like how the "r" and "t" have that arrow shit at the top. also dont like the extension on top the "s"..the rest looks dope and gives that euro style feel, nice color combo..diggin the white highlights too

    slotr - u got that style on lock man..u should ink and color your shit more often


    prea - what u posted on page 892 is fucking burning.

    zook - bro that shit is so wack, no offence. stick to what u were doing before

    aspek - i see your getting better man, nice "z" and the "a" is good too,but what happen to the middle part? i would fix that "p" asap tho

    mori - the roller is tight, but the cracks kinda look like roots, i would also make them pop out of the letters. that slap u made is nice, but i would take away the extension on the top left of the "m" and thickin up the "r" more in the skinny part and thickin up the extension just a bit more

    reach - im drunk and i wont be nice. your shit is looking exactly the same as when i last saw it. its not bad if it were painted, but as a sketch its boring.

    fase - im feeling that black and green sketch. But that "f" and "a" look like a different style compared to the other 2 letters.

    Mayoe - dope slaps man, but ill crit the last one. the "y" looks like a "t" or maybe even a busted "J" ..work on that

    gemer - drop all the special effects like the drips and shit, work on your letters. they aint bad, usually i dont really like your shit to be honest,

    Phil - your sketch for brute and the one before that are not up to par with the other sketches ive seen from you. step your game up, and quit hating.

    gemer - that letter "b" on that "rbc" sketch is alright, also that "m" on the monday peice is alright, tho i would thickin up the middle..the rest of your letters need work, but seem to be going to the right track, just keep on truckin and u will get better. also i would say to scrap the special effects and leave it for when you get better in a few months, but thats just me.

    seyor - change up your hand bro, it looks the same, get funky with it, no matter if it looks wack. Sometimes you learn from being wack, you dig.
    The extensions on the "o" are overboard man, shit got 3 extensions going to the right, wtf? the rest looking pretty good.

    extinct - yo that "E" is fucking fire, im going to borrow that backbone and switch it up to my own steez, i like it alot. The letter "a" would make a dope "o" , the rest of the letters aint bad, but compared to that "e" there trash

    scank - my memory could serve wrong, but im pretty sure ive seen your "n" and "c" little already. make them the same size as the other letters man. That "a" with the heart ive seen a few times from you too, switch it up, like i told seyor, doing wack shit is sometimes better than doing the same old shit, cuz you learn what doesnt work, witch then in turn lets u see what could work, and sometimes from some wack shit u can find some a little good shit inside..my 2 cents

    Paint face - that brains sketch is fucking wack, add special effects when you got something proper going, those letters are basic..and i find it homo as fuck that you took the time to sketch a name for someone you dont like in the first place. Btw sear burns you.

    demot and tekon , your on your way to becoming intermediate. my humble opinion, your not ready to post here yet.

    phat and mone - delete the shit rootpill, skadeem, tempo and knowtheledge posted. its straight up garbage..dont sign up to be a mod if you aint gonna clean this place up once in awhile.

    FUCK THAT SHIT TOOK FOREVER TO WRITE.
     
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  11. bait

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    eeeeyyyy lil practice for official battle
    aint gon crit cause the guy above me pretty much said it all
     
  12. swae101

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    just a lil pen freebie i cooked up

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  13. extinct

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    thanks for the tip tofe... that bottom piece is fire... the k is lacking a tad bit... the top of the s is off too
     
  14. Jiska Matos

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  15. paintfaceVT

    paintfaceVT Senior Member

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    Photo on 2012-01-08 at 09.39.jpg
    Gonna grab cans hopefully soon, and paint this, thinking about doing the black and white color scheme not sure, any ideas, also that shit is way too long up top^^ also why you tryna act like I have beef with Sear, I dont really like Phillip but thats cause he can be an asshole sometimes, Im just gonna keep my mouth shut when it comes to that cat, I like how telling someone whats wrong with there shit on a site thats meant for that is frowned upon now.
     
  16. FlippingChickens

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    Who cares if its long, its better than anything I've seen you comment so read up, ill talk all i want. You can crit by pointing out what works and what doesn't. When you gave your opinion on sear it was written in a way that made it look like your player hating. Whats the point of talking shit about sears letter structure , there u are talking about how u wanna paint that sketch , when sear is freestyling on the spot, fuck painting a sketch, whats exciting and organic about that? NOTHING. If your painting from a sketch then your not testing yourself and not letting yourself be free. You talk about letter structure and you got arrows coming out of nowhere with letters making themselves look like others, for example that "e" looks like a "o" and the "U" looks like a "v" or a shitty "i" next to a shitty "L" ..idk maybe it wouldn't be so bad without the "edi" on the inside..and without the special effect cloud and the color inside the 3d you really wouldn't have such a strong piece..truth hurts.

    ps - don't get me wrong, arrows do come out of nowhere, but when there done properly they look almost as if they belong rather than it being randomly placed somewhere. honestly i think arrows are for those who are VERY experienced, but go ahead and do them, i don't care, its just my opinion, go ahead and paint as many arrows as u will like if it helps u sleep at night haha

    pss - dude below me, that "z" and "n" ..no offense, are fucking awful..the first bar of the "N" isn't bad, but the middle needs to be thickened up and the little swirl in the bottom has to go..the other bar looks awkward because its touching the first bar and i think it should curve a lot more to the right and the top i think should be thickened up a lot more like how u did with the backbone of your "e"...the "e" on the other hand has mad potential but gets weird on the bottom, the top and the backbone are looking crisp and very nice..i also think u shouldn't do arrows and i think u should worry more about your structure and HANDSTYLES, very important to practice hands. pretty sure it was dream ( rip ) who said it best " remember to always have a good handstyle, because you can put many around and thats gonna make other writers want to see your other work alot more" and thats the pure truth, and all the best writers say that without a good hand you won't have a strong piece.
     
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  17. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

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    @eres sweeet man
    @ Bait soo sick man diggen that style alot
    @flipping chickens thanks man thumbs up
    freestylen
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  18. 4menace2society0

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  19. gemer

    gemer Senior Member

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    dopety dope man diggen it ^^^
     
  20. Evow1

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