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This is my tag any tips?

Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by ArcticWolf43, Feb 9, 2021.

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  1. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    Sup
    anyways this is my tag what do you think

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  2. Orientoswitcho

    Orientoswitcho Member

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    Try to repeat the same angle on every letters
     
  3. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    thanks if i take out the arrow i think it looks better
     
  4. vigostar

    vigostar Senior Member

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    What does it spell?
     
  5. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    Dude I say this to help but that tag is discusting. Make a simple clean straight letter. You need to learn letter structure and fundementals befor you try what your trying to do. Study the fundementals of calligraphy and perfect your print handwriting. Style is something that comes over time and it cannot be forced if you are not ready. If you can learn this you will surpass a lot of people and it will carry on into all aspects of your art.
     
  6. Orientoswitcho

    Orientoswitcho Member

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    Dude's not wrong about this, starting with simpler letters makes you learn everything about them, then eventually it's gonna come by itself
     
  7. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    The letters are EPHMRL
    The L is a lot better now but I think i get what youre saying
    what exactly is wrong with it though like why is it bad
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  8. Orientoswitcho

    Orientoswitcho Member

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    Maybe write letters that roll off the tongue better, gonna be easier
     
  9. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    Don't worry about what rolls off your young better. Just choose a word that makes sense. I usually tell kids choose a word thats 4 to 6 letters long. it doesn't matter if it's someone else's name as long as it isn't a dead artist or a legendary artist. IG artists don't count. Good job fixing the L but KEEP IT SIMPLE! MAKE A STRAIGHT LETTER. Style is the enemy of all beginners. You achieve style by fully understanding and mastering the fundamentals. Please take my advice.
     
  10. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    Ok thank you
    I don't think im gonna change the word because I like it (shortened version of ephemeral) but ill work on the letters
     
  11. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    Nice meaning but your career is gonna be ephemeral with that name. It's impractical, and nobody is gonna know what your name stands for.
     
  12. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    im good with that they don't need to
    i know what it stands for and im not doing it for other people so whatever
     
  13. Swul

    Swul Senior Member

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    nobody:
    Novel_808: *critiques the shit out of everyone but has yet to show his work on it*
     
  14. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    :eek:
    My work is on other forums but I get why your mad.
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  15. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    What goes up must come down. What swings to one side must swing to the other. Balance g. Energy travels and its gotta be released↑↑↑

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  16. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    Novel your work is sick
     
  17. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    Thanks bro. Really Sorry I didnt give exmples before. Can't beleive I was forgetting that. That 'S" is probaly the best example of what I mean when I talk about the eaqual and opposite motion.
     
  18. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    Nah all good i get it now but yeah you want the piece to be balanced. I also found a youtube video that explained extensions really well so i think i get that now too. im working on a piece now but i dont have it with me so i cant post a picture, ill show you when i finish cause it definitely makes more sense than the last one.
     
  19. Novel_808

    Novel_808 Senior Member

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    cant wait to see
     
  20. ArcticWolf43

    ArcticWolf43 Senior Member

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    I just did this sketch now its really simple but thats usually how I start my pieces i just wanted to ask what you think about this outline?

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