All need improvement.
Make your letters relate and flow with each other.

 

I know it's hella sloppy, did it in like 3 minutes, but just to see where I"m at: (which is probably 'stick to keyboard letters' still LOL)
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Yup! but ur headed in the right direction.

 

Crits

 

@Tolr8 - WAY better. Jus keep working on your letter structure, and start working on fills.

 

First of the day, Idk even know y im posting it.

 

dat last one. sexy, man just sexy.

 

Taro change your r cus your ta throwies look nice but the full taro the r really put me off

 

What should i change about it?

 

Try a lower case R and then do the face in the a on the o or make the r look a bit more like this

 

What about the sketched throw in the post jus above the painted one?

 

Nah Make the r more like the way 4eyes does it and make the hole in the o in the middle trust me put a swirl cross or face in the middle off the o and make the r look more like 4eyes and post a pic

 

I just got back, so ill go out a little later.

 

actually i just sketch it, hold on.

 

Did a little something in photoshop this is how i say it shud look

 

Im kind or embarrassed of this lol

 

its nice but i like the original better.

 

Me too.