Thanks its rough not entering it just a lil practice but I'm sure mild styles dankbudz and some other heads around here can pick it apart lol. Like my letters increased in size as it goes an issue I had figured the solution to before. A few more throws I'll have that straight. So exchange anyone?? I write kopr
That k reminds me of phat2 aka venoms old h. Anyway keep practicing man take little pieces of things you see and like make it you're own and burn through a bunch of notebooks progress will come with time a practice.
yeah looking back at that it's pretty poor haha, will keep practicing need to get my own throwie style nailed
yo! big up kopr and elboe! practicing one liners atm so can I get some legit crits on this? ignore the tags [Broken External Image]:https://fbcdn-sphotos-e-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-ash3/1521938_793424020684509_813384826_n.jpg
ICR - middle left one on the bottom picture is nice and clean venom - to me that looks sick, the a is legit as foook. maybe try and get the 2 a bit more 2 ish? i think when you're going round the right on the 2 you could go further down so the top bubble is bigger than the bottom one.
@nos It's gettting better, but I think you should abandon that style completely, or atleast try something new like this from mook life: not my shit; found it on http://www.mook-life.com/montreal-legal-murals-giving-back-to-the-community/
Phat it looks good bro I like everything besides when I really look at the a the top seems out of proportion somewhat because of that lower case h have only one leg on top because its lower case if you catch what I mean try a capital h I know that's your signature h but step away from the lower case for the one liner.
@Nos the second throw down on the last pic is dope G. Could possibly ditch the openings on the letters though and keep them closed. For example, on the O, don't make a whole in it. Instead try a line or something. Get creative. Just my two cents.