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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. biblebeltbangerz

    biblebeltbangerz Elite Member

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    your K is just missing its knee. will be doper when its there.
     
  2. MR_BUBBLES

    MR_BUBBLES Member

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    heres a couple throws i did. id love some crits on them. also some recommendations on how to make the z look better would help a lot. 96ee59d.jpg
     
  3. EDGEx585

    EDGEx585 Senior Member

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    bigpen im feeling that last one, especially the E, just gotta try to get a little more into the K and it will be pretty cool

    Zs are kinda goofy to get used to doing, depending on the style sometimes its easier to do your top bar and bottom bar, and then the middle, but if its got its own style then its a different story
     
  4. niur

    niur Member

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    first throwie, crit me
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  5. MR_BUBBLES

    MR_BUBBLES Member

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    @niur im far from being an expert at this but i would mess with the n it looks kind of like a c mixed with something else image.jpg crits on this please
     
  6. SophLife

    SophLife Senior Member

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    That Y could use some work, I get you're doing the opposite of the B for length but I would bring the bottom up a bit more, make it consistent with the top of the B, and I would bring the right side up higher because the "wave" you've got is to big. and on this specific one the vertical line leading to the hook is to long, so it makes it look to bubbly, the one on your A is perfect length. And don't forget to round out the corners of your Z
     
  7. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Here's something I was thinking up today
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    And here's the regular throw
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  8. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    Still dont have an acceptable throw in my opinion.
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  9. Arose.One

    Arose.One Elite Member

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  10. Vapid666

    Vapid666 Elite Member

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    @arose Hmm? Can you explain?
     
  11. fingerlickingchicken

    fingerlickingchicken Senior Member

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  12. MR_BUBBLES

    MR_BUBBLES Member

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    Here's another throw I did. I messed with some of the letters like the Z and Y. Also does anyone know if I can drop the Y, the only BAZ I can find is older pictures and they are all DJ BAZ. image.jpg crits please
     
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  13. ur210

    ur210 Senior Member

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    @sybe thats fucking dope. liked the second one particularly

    @bayz try to keep the base of your letters the same height and width.
     
  14. Lich

    Lich Senior Member

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    not sure which one im feeling. crits please?
     
  15. MR_BUBBLES

    MR_BUBBLES Member

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    @Lich, the second one is way better.
    image.jpg Crits on this, I messed the B up but the rest is getting there. Is it almost ready to go up?
     
  16. SophLife

    SophLife Senior Member

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    the top line of the hook on your Y should bubble out like the B and A, and try to keep a consistent overlap, also the right part of the top of your Y should be a bit wider. You have to think about the letters separately and make sure they have decent structure and then overlap them. Keep practicing it until you can get it perfect practically every time, and then practice with a can, and THEN you can start getting up.
     
  17. SophLife

    SophLife Senior Member

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    The colors didn't turn out how it was pictured in my mind, but it looks a little better on paper. Still working on some of the things I posted above, but overall I'm starting to get better and better at it. I'm also still working on keeping my lines straight. Thats probably still the hardest part. Crits please!!

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  18. Mauws

    Mauws New Member

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    Kay, so yeah
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    So this is my first post and shit, IDK, gimme crits or props or whatever, I've been on and off from doing anything like this because I'm just busy and shit with work and school, so I still consider myself a toy by far. It says MAUWS btw, and the yellow one was an attempt to add some simple characters.

    @SophLife Don't take advice from me, but I just thought I'd give you my opinion and shit. Props because it looks pretty clean to me and shit, maybe next you should add some shadow? IDK yo, but still, looks dope to me.
     
  19. _flocka_

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  20. InnerCityRebel

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