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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Overall I like the orange one. That is not really working, it's too different from the other letters. Only other thing is loosen your flow, it'll help give you cleaner lines.
     
  2. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Most important thing is to have a name you can work with. Gravel is not an easy letter combo. Pell is cool but with one L.
     
  3. SAYO

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    Do you think the two l balence would be too much?
     
  4. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ For tags, yeah. Throws and pieces, might not be too bad. One L seems a lot easier and a little faster. It's not that easy to pull off double letters, not a lot of people out there can do it right. Also, in my opinion one L looks better, especially being at the end.
     
  5. Dommy

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    Hey all,

    Here's what I've got going on.

    ai1306.photobucket.com_albums_s561_DommyCastles_Vers_e2abc593_59d824725f1544618e32ca45d0a83481.jpg

    Any tips/crits would be greatly appreciated!
     
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  6. noad215

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  7. osber

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    Ditch the #1 and hope somebody else wrote it there. You know you're your fiirst priority why arw you writing it after your name? Every time you write your name its for afdirmation, and every #1 you write is for #1, not for you.
     
  8. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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  9. baabo123

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    rps20141110_145955.jpg rps20141110_145850.jpg wich style is better and can you read it? Also how could i improve that?
     
  10. thespine

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  11. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ A lot can be done with dollar cans.
     
  12. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    Ok. The top one, I'm a have to say no. Scrap it.
    The bottom one you can work with it. Fix that R and that exclamation, make the top bigger and the circle smaller.
     
  13. LeaksOne

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    My advice to you all, think middle school when girls used to write their bubble letters. Start simple, get comfortable with your letter, look around for inspiration, don't bite, and then funk it up. All the throws on this page look alike and it's weird...
     
  14. noad215

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    Thanks man didnt know.
     
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  17. LeaksOne

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    Colors are too dark, letters aren't appealing. Literally try to draw it as fast as you can. It makes it less forced. Also, look around for inspiration on those letters.
     
  18. Dommy

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    Bump, anyone got any tips for me?

    Those look real good Bugs!
     
  19. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^ Thanks Dommy. I think you should change everything or at least rework some letters. If thats a V, make it look like a V. The E and R just need to be a little cleaner. Redo the S thats not looking good. Get rid of all those lines in the letters and practice your drop shadow. Also loosen up your flow, letters look almost forced. Keep at it.
     
  20. Dommy

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    Thanks Bugs, I'll keep filling my book!