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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
Crits please? (Besides the lame ghost and latfo tag)
^^^ Not sure what to say, seems like no matter what we say you still keep doing the same stuff over and over. Ok, the N and D just no, you'd be better off with a lower case n. That upside down cross on the O is not working. The dash on the A, no good. The quotes on the D, no. Loosen up your hand it looks too forced. Mess around with different shapes and styles of letters.
Messing around with a new name, WSN (war solves nothing). Let me know what you guys think. I didn't realize someone wrote Rain until it was pointed out to me by another guy on this site.
Unless I've missed some thing, because I've only skimmed this fourm and skipped all the way to the last page, I can still post actual throwies and not just sketches so heres one I that did awhile, Any constructive criticism is accepted Thanks guys!
Sorry about camera flash and horrible quality bu besides that Please help on my handstyle. Im trying to develop a new one, This is btw down inside my house on some posterboards for practice because It was raining hard that night. Thanks!
War solves nothing
^^^ 2nd pic, 3rd row, 2nd from bottom. Work with that one. N look cool, work with the W a little more and add more detail to the S its missing something. But good progress, keep at it.
Super shitty pictures, Ill get better ones later
Bioe YW, never heard of him but the throw is fresh
@ Grabs : That Blame throw is cool, only thing is the B and L don't really go with the A,M and E.
On the Ovar throw, that O and A need to change they don't look good with the V and R. The R is also kinda looking like a K. That Ovar handstyle is looking a little all over the place. It looks like it says Ovale. The L on the UTL looks like a Z.
@bugs Thanks and I feel you dude. Im honestly not that experienced with painting at all, my can control is kinda shitty which doesnt help. You down for a throw exchange?
A one liner I'm trying to develop, any crits
Naked, the throw is nice, although the negative space between the E and D looks weird, aswelk as some of your color combinations. Nice stickers too
just made this style now. 1st time ever using it. let me now what yall think. the n top will be adjusted next time tho and prob wont usee the dots at the end . -NAKED I
ummm youre fuckin kidding right? ^^^^
Also, not even because you chose my name, but as a broad statement to all toys, never put one after your name. Youre not the first. Any word you choose to write is taken, and putting one after it looks fuckin ridiculous when you can barely form letters
wait so u go by naked i
^^^ Yeah, he does. He earned that 'cause he prefers to do graff in the nude.
names come at a high price. My man had to eat 6 cockroaches for even thinking about getting the screen name to have bugs in it.
Separate names with a comma.