Can I get some crits on this throw Ive been messing around with. Does it flow or should I just scrap it?
@Cats fur dayz: What does that say? Keep hitting the paper. @th3villian: 2nd pic bottom right is one you should work on. @Panic: That looks pretty cool. Once you can perfect the letters it'll be a lot better. @REKS: I say scratch that. If you can simplify the letters a little it might look better.
It says Slug lol yeah I figured I have a long way to go but I just wanted a first commentary on it before I go about making changes
had a some leftover paint that i thought i'd use, not particularly happy with the left part of the H and the bottom of the L
@phile stick to paper right now @big like taro said wats with the black above? take out those arrows on the C in the SFC,
damn working on this throw has been frustrating. there's so much hot shit around my area looking at my stuff just makes it worse. anyway I reckon the two letter isn't half bad. crits would be appreciated I gotta work on developing something !!
i think the top one looks good but dude i think those highlights you try and add into the letters makes it worse, in a throw atleast. but thats just my opinion. i like that top R just keep practicing and keep all the bumps and stuff in your letters consistent with eachother.