@rest Your handstyle isn't half bad but you gotta keep practicing your throwies and trying different styles. @tuke Looks fresh man I like the first one, but like grabs said round off the k to match it with the other letters. Crits welcome. old throw
how are you people feeling about this shitty oneliner with the letters tu and next to it letters ke in an arrow
@tuke that shit looks whack dude, dont leave the negative space in the U and get rid of the arrow @sneak first two attempts, if you wanna throw me one go for it. I write ovar/over random Ovam throw for talk
The last page looks nice Tuke those top pictures are dope but the one liner one isnt there yet, keep at it Keepsitlow that throw looks sick, im down for an exchange if ud like Mento the e kinda looks like an f and try to get rid of the negative space in between some of your letters Dommy that looks good to me, says hero right? Im down for an exchange if you want
Alright man sounds good, il have something by tomorrow and yeh either germs or jerms which ever you prefer
Still playin with the lewn name kinda like this throw. Not sure if I should go with round tops or squared ones
i like it, but i like your top W more. its sick but that little bump you add in the other ones i dont like so much but thats just personal opinion throws for an exchange with hero
Zest try to not have the negative space inbetween your letters like that, unless its IN your letter and not inbetween them if you get what im saying? i see your trying to keep it somewhat simple which is good but the letters could use work and could look nicer, less is more in lots of cases so just keep it simple and keep practicing. any thoughts on these? just started messing with a new throw today, i know it needs work and to be honed and shit. any crits would be cool
@loon those are looking nice dude. dont only do negative space in the E though, looks odd @zest stop painting dude, your throw is ass. Work on throws on paper until they at least look decent before painting. ^ turban gave good advice @turban Those hero throws are clean. I dont really fuck with that new throw though homie, the M to S transition looks off. I'd cut out the connection between the two, make the M complete and make the S a little smaller to match the alternating sizes.
Ignore all the extra bs, what can I do better or differently on my throw? Also wrong thread for this but hand style Crit?
@Suburbanturban I like the germs style but ud need to make the 's' look more like in 's' looks almost like an 'i' or just a random extention.. I like the idea tho