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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. jak24

    jak24 Senior Member

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    @Suburbanturban I like the germs style but ud need to make the 's' look more like in 's' looks almost like an 'i' or just a random extention.. I like the idea tho
     
  2. SuburbanTurban

    SuburbanTurban Elite Member

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    thanks all of you for the crits i appreciate them. il keep working at it

    Mento its looking better then before but i think it would look better if you lost the bumps at the bottom of your M and E. as for the tag the bends in your N are wrong man especially the right line, just keep it more straight. other then that its not bad dude just keep practicing!
     
  3. flipper200

    flipper200 New Member

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  4. lurkermuch

    lurkermuch Member

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    throw is llooking sick loon

    throw is looking sick germs + your exchange one too
     
    Last edited: Apr 17, 2015
  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    I never really worked on throws, like ever. But now that im returning from my legal hiatus ive decided to focus on them some. This is my starting point. Pretty basic, nothing special.

    20150417_111959.jpg
     
  6. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @Phazr If you're gonna add that spiked bit on the P, id recommend doing the same on the R for symmetry. Besides that, looking good.
     
  7. jak24

    jak24 Senior Member

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    I find the throw looks pretty solid without the spike. I feel it might ruin the flow of the rest.
     
  8. Mits

    Mits Senior Member

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    DA, forgot to do the shadow but yeah, crits?
    tumblr_nn0r0yEx8Z1tiuu2vo1_1280.jpg
     
  9. stoke.

    stoke. Senior Member

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    i think that adding at least 2 more letters would help
     
  10. Zeho

    Zeho Member

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    photo 1.jpg photo 1.jpg

    Havnt been writing long, Gimmie your crits
     
  11. Grabs

    Grabs Senior Member

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    @mits not bad but theres not much there to give crits on lol

    @zeho get rid of the negative space between the letters and stop making your letters look distorted and expanded in weird ways. simplicity is key

    random throw for talk
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    Last edited: Apr 20, 2015
  12. lurkermuch

    lurkermuch Member

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    Love it grabs nice work man
     
  13. Zeho

    Zeho Member

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    @grabs ill try and get a better flick of another one of my throws, the distortion is just because the photo got expanded.
     
  14. loonaii

    loonaii Elite Member

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    Lol a photo being expanded won't distort ur letters bro.
     
  15. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  16. poopdick1er

    poopdick1er Member

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    This shits fire sir,run with it.
     
  17. Grey Matter

    Grey Matter Member

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    huge toy here, looking for any feedback. 2nd time trying to sketch out a possible throwie and i feel a lot more lost compared to tag handstyles which make more sense to me at the moment. With that in mind i just kept it simple.

    2nd throwie.jpg
     
  18. Grey Matter

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    looking through some pages, im clearly the bottom the ladder here, I can see my R definitely needs to get changed to something else.
    still looking for tips to point me in the right direction, only tryna get better
     
  19. maggots

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    Less white space, squish it together.
     
  20. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^ For some reason that sounds dirty.