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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Misfitking138

    Misfitking138 New Member

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    1440465684517.jpg nubie bomber here first throw up
     
  2. bugs-one

    bugs-one Elite Member

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    ^^^^ Thats your throw up? I wouldn't consider that a throw up.

    Is it an M?
     
  3. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Oral, I like the idea you got there. Keep at it
     
  4. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    He's the artist formerly known as misfit
     
  5. Travel

    Travel Senior Member

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    What do ye think of this as a throw up? Sorry about the quality my camera on my phones a bit messed up lately it won't focus right :p
     

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  6. sabter

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    everything looks tight except the w. maybe bring the top together
     
  7. n3mo

    n3mo New Member

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    sope.jpg need some crits
     
  8. sabter

    sabter Member

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    maybe try bending the e in to match the p. the way the top of the o goes into the s looks awkward. if there is a drop shadow on the bottom left its not on the s,s bump or the in part of the e. the bump on the e is also awkward overlap it. dope style
     
  9. LeaksOne

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    Don't format it like an actual word. Make every letter the same size, no capital letters. But also, your s is awkward, the w is decent, the a is eh, and the e is weak
     
  10. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    Nope. Somehow this is too advanced for you. Start with a simpler style.
     
  11. Travel

    Travel Senior Member

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    OK thanks leaks. What would you change on the s ?
     
  12. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    It's a little too top heavy
     
  13. saint1185

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  14. Zearo902

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    Make the letters half as tall, remove the thing from the top of that E.
     
  15. Zearo902

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    Bottom of the "A" should be more like the bottom f the "R", "S" is dope, "U" needs to be the same size.

    And the tag, same with the throw, try to keep the letters all the same size.
     
  16. saint1185

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    Thanks i will keep at it
     
  17. saint1185

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  18. CanMan

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    Blue and white ones were first attempts with paint about a month ago. Red/white ones were a few weeks ago. Crits welcomed. Just been working in the books and cardboard for now. My city is buffed regularly so I just work from the house right now haha.

    Before Crit:
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    After:
    IMAG1013_1.jpg
     

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  19. LeaksOne

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    Prok? Your letters are kinda weird
     
  20. CanMan

    CanMan Member

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    haha.. weird like how? Just dont seem like they go together? I'm pretty new at this.