Also grabs om left handed so it is harder.

 

You just gotta work on your Pen control, the lines are shaky af

 

But i can make it look better but I have a bad habit of rushing throwies. But thanks for picking that up.

 

I'm normally shake when I'm tired as well. I can control my pen.

 

This is more control.

 

Also my can control is way better.

 

Why do u post like 6 times in a row? And ur supposed to rush throwies u just look like u have Parkinson's or something

 

Good one keep the beef somewhere else. I know you are supposed to rush throwies but I rush really bad on paper. Like in 10 sec. In paint normally 2 min (including fill). I know.

 

MASTAH_RIBCAGE = The only one talking sense on this subject.

 

Loving these throws man nice, simple, clean lines, especially the second a bit more styled out sik bro keep at it.

 

He got that style from Mr wiggles, its an out dated style that shit May have looked good in the eighties but not anymore

 

Man 80/90 were the golden age of everything in hip hop culture..Or am I just keeping it oldschool
btw thx emohbe

 

I fucked up the A on this but still, fill looks better than normal... Hmu with crits, also bought some kobra so will have some throwies on walls up soon.

 

@Rib I feel you to an extent. Theres always more to do with letters, just have to have the skills and knowledge to execute them well. As for everyone in the toy forums, I 100% agree with looking into styles that work and building off them.

@Jeht being left handed doesnt really serve as a good reason to be shaking like a nervous chihuahua. Stop making excuses, stop posting 5 times in a row and work on your control. Dont attempt to say every negative crit about you is "beef", your letters lack and youre getting crits for a reason. As for the last throw you posted, the bottom of the J carries substantially more weight than the top which makes it look worse than it is.

@Burky First, Turban is 100% right. That second one isnt too shabby, definitely needs a few fixes to make it be able to be thrown up without people automatically thinking you're a toy. The left side of the B is awful, cut out the little extensions. The sharpened top of your letters looks odd with the varying heights as well. The biggest issue i see if consistency when it comes to sizing. If flows pretty well even with the mistakes you made, keep working.

 

Yo krayen I'm not sure if the Goal way to switch it up,but this one is identical to the others

 

What @banko? Yeah it is pretty similar, and way I could make it more individual/improve?