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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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  2. knightsafe

    knightsafe Member

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    new shit crits welcome afc68.deviantart.com_fs38_i_2008_342_d_4_throwface_by_fastnloud.jpg
  3. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    Thanks for the crits guy...
    some new shit...changed my name...sneak overlap ur letters instead of stopping them where the new letters begin...

    Im kinda confused on how to overlap them can you show me an example?

    GETRAD Senior Member

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    i think alot of ppl on this page need to take a step back before going for the color, work on the structure. obviously some ppl dont but you shoul dknow who im talking about

    trying to work on the fades w/in the fill:
  5. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  6. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    getrad take your own advice
  7. miteone

    miteone Senior Member

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  8. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    akel- not so sure about the highlights in the throw..i feel like that only looks good on throws that are filled in really solid..and only sometimes on certain styles ..i do like that throwup a lot though. just minus the highlights..

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  9. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i think it's moreso the color's he chose. i think it'd look aiight with highlights if it was black and gold, or something

    tride, i think the E is throwing off your throwie, it's dope and original. but when i look at the E to cap it off, i get that.
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  10. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    [Broken External Image]:

    shitty webcam picture, shitty throw

    moms - looks good, not feeling the bump on the bottom left of the s

    akels - looks nice, id dot your a's and e's

    getrad - make your a and d smaller but other than that it looks good

    safe - loos the charrac on your f, the only letter that looks alright is your e so keep working on it

    noyu - nice simples, keep working on your y, it doesnt look as good as your other letters in my opinion

  11. muse2

    muse2 Member

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    stonk, i like your "m" i find them really hard to make into a throw.
  12. Scheme*119

    Scheme*119 Elite Member

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    made my throw into some d00dz, just experimenting, yes or no?
  13. CandyRain88

    CandyRain88 Senior Member

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    everything on this page is pretty solid...klic on yur s take out the vertical line on the inside then bring out the bottom line more
  14. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    Just the top right throwy. fucked up on the bottom one.

    Shpel - Take that huge line out the inside of your S
    Dying to live - fresh
    candy - feelin the first throw, not so much the second two
  15. gcrolla

    gcrolla Elite Member

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    Soupkta-Don't connect your letters like that, they letters themselves look alright though.
    Darkeist- Dope, did a good job keeping the letters the same size, fill em in!
    DyingToLive- Raww, get out of the toy forum haha. Highlights look kind of wierd with that color fill though.
    Scheme- Don't make the faces with the letters and it will look better.
  16. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    thanks man. i should have some fill ins. on thursday when i get my camera
  17. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    darkiest..get on msn whore
    got my NEWcamera today...and it works :D
  18. markingz.

    markingz. Banned

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    hey man that throw is soo fresh damn. And candy rain that girl in your sig has a really nice rack, wouldn't mind putting my dick between those.
  19. TASR

    TASR Banned

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    yo smooth, lovin' the dope, but your E looks allot like ohsnaps, but who cares, hes banned.
  20. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    Oh shit, I just made a new A for myself today, but before I did, mine looked almost exactly like yours. Anyway, I like it. I agree with Tride about the highlights, but it looks like you needed it with that color combination otherwise you couldn't see the outline very well.

    Tride- I like it all except the T. D is awesome.

    Tasr- Definitely work on your T, looks like you should make the opening between the top and bottom of the A a little wider. And some of your 3D is off. Pretty nice though.