View attachment 430819 View attachment 430820 crits??? sneak- change your "k" up a little. and change the top of the "a"
Thanks for the crits guy... some new shit...changed my name...sneak overlap ur letters instead of stopping them where the new letters begin... Im kinda confused on how to overlap them can you show me an example?
i think alot of ppl on this page need to take a step back before going for the color, work on the structure. obviously some ppl dont but you shoul dknow who im talking about trying to work on the fades w/in the fill:
akel- not so sure about the highlights in the throw..i feel like that only looks good on throws that are filled in really solid..and only sometimes on certain styles ..i do like that throwup a lot though. just minus the highlights.. View attachment 431229
i think it's moreso the color's he chose. i think it'd look aiight with highlights if it was black and gold, or something tride, i think the E is throwing off your throwie, it's dope and original. but when i look at the E to cap it off, i get that.
[Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/IMG000216.jpg shitty webcam picture, shitty throw moms - looks good, not feeling the bump on the bottom left of the s akels - looks nice, id dot your a's and e's getrad - make your a and d smaller but other than that it looks good safe - loos the charrac on your f, the only letter that looks alright is your e so keep working on it noyu - nice simples, keep working on your y, it doesnt look as good as your other letters in my opinion crits
bump everything on this page is pretty solid...klic on yur s take out the vertical line on the inside then bring out the bottom line more
Just the top right throwy. fucked up on the bottom one. Shpel - Take that huge line out the inside of your S Dying to live - fresh candy - feelin the first throw, not so much the second two
Soupkta-Don't connect your letters like that, they letters themselves look alright though. Darkeist- Dope, did a good job keeping the letters the same size, fill em in! DyingToLive- Raww, get out of the toy forum haha. Highlights look kind of wierd with that color fill though. Scheme- Don't make the faces with the letters and it will look better.
hey man that throw is soo fresh damn. And candy rain that girl in your sig has a really nice rack, wouldn't mind putting my dick between those.
Oh shit, I just made a new A for myself today, but before I did, mine looked almost exactly like yours. Anyway, I like it. I agree with Tride about the highlights, but it looks like you needed it with that color combination otherwise you couldn't see the outline very well. Tride- I like it all except the T. D is awesome. Tasr- Definitely work on your T, looks like you should make the opening between the top and bottom of the A a little wider. And some of your 3D is off. Pretty nice though.