You definitely need to fix the fade. Also fix your letters and your outlines. You made almost every Toy mistake. The up and down things on the T look horrible. Attaching the A and T is typical beginner shit, don't do that. The top of the O is off from the other letters. All the letters are bad. Stick to SIMPLE basic letters. Keep at it on paper until you get something decent. If you're really in this graff thing, don't get offended, take everyone's advice seriously and improve.