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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
try making some small changes and seeing how it goes
Made some changes looks a lil better
I think the P still needs some work. Still is hard to discern that one. Also the bump on the back of the K seems out of place, no other elements of that is carried through your other letters.
The bump on the k is fine but put the same bump on the a and p in the same spot it would flow better. . The p is funky the round part needs to be bigger then the leg . Or you have to cock the bottom of the leg to the right so it seem bent and puck8ng on its self
Not in a dick way but you gotta fill it better . White does suck for fills in the beginning . Get some fat caps deff helps . Letter wise the bump on the back of the p shouldn't be there and the line connecting the negative space in the p should also not be there . The o could be more round . And the bottom right of the e could be smaller cus it has more weight then the top but the p is the other way around . Witch could work to offset but practice more . Practice stretching the letters top to bottom . Just to give your self more room to work on the letters . Hoped that helps .
Lower case a
Thoughts on this throwie? Any tips and criticisms would be very helpful. Also how does the tag look?
I definitely think the throw is better than the tag. The only thing that I think could change with the throw is make the N look less like an H. For tag maybe space out the letters a little bit but idk bc I suck at tags myself. That’s all I can think of but I’m new to this so idrk
Thoughts guys? Is this still toy?
I fw it
Ran out of purple lmao
Thanks my G!
I dig the raw style and the colors btw
Time to shine
That's alot better . Only thing I would do different is instead of a hashtag. I would have made a little cappitle D . In the d
Yea, I agree. Right now it reads Hero to me with the hashtag.
forsude. I just threw those on my thinking.
Separate names with a comma.