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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. lukecain

    lukecain New Member

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    try making some small changes and seeing how it goes
     
  2. ALLKAPS

    ALLKAPS New Member

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    Made some changes looks a lil better

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  3. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    I think the P still needs some work. Still is hard to discern that one. Also the bump on the back of the K seems out of place, no other elements of that is carried through your other letters.
     
  4. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    The bump on the k is fine but put the same bump on the a and p in the same spot it would flow better. . The p is funky the round part needs to be bigger then the leg . Or you have to cock the bottom of the leg to the right so it seem bent and puck8ng on its self
     
  5. lukecain

    lukecain New Member

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    crits??
     
  6. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    Not in a dick way but you gotta fill it better . White does suck for fills in the beginning . Get some fat caps deff helps . Letter wise the bump on the back of the p shouldn't be there and the line connecting the negative space in the p should also not be there . The o could be more round . And the bottom right of the e could be smaller cus it has more weight then the top but the p is the other way around . Witch could work to offset but practice more . Practice stretching the letters top to bottom . Just to give your self more room to work on the letters . Hoped that helps .
     
  7. ears

    ears Senior Member

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    Lower case a

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  8. Mspc2

    Mspc2 New Member

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    Thoughts on this throwie? Any tips and criticisms would be very helpful. Also how does the tag look?

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  9. ezey

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    I definitely think the throw is better than the tag. The only thing that I think could change with the throw is make the N look less like an H. For tag maybe space out the letters a little bit but idk bc I suck at tags myself. That’s all I can think of but I’m new to this so idrk
     
  10. KeefCity

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  11. ezey

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  12. ezey

    ezey Member

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    Ran out of purple lmao

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  13. KeefCity

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    Thanks my G!
     
  14. KeefCity

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  15. Kaps2

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  16. mopbucket

    mopbucket Senior Member

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  17. mopbucket

    mopbucket Senior Member

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    Time to shine

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  18. ElbowMacK187

    ElbowMacK187 Elite Member

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    That's alot better . Only thing I would do different is instead of a hashtag. I would have made a little cappitle D . In the d

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  19. SpawnCamp

    SpawnCamp Senior Member

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    Yea, I agree. Right now it reads Hero to me with the hashtag.
     
  20. mopbucket

    mopbucket Senior Member

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