NyFat and Universal Outline are all you need.
Your shine is way off tho and your K is pretty fucked. Don’t mess with paint yet.

 

How are they supposed to learn if they don't mess with paint?

 

I finally got this throwie the way i like it and now… want to see… if other people like it
so please tell me
[Broken External Image]:https://imgur.com/a/wk8yN4a

 

Just started graffiti but have been bombing for à while and i am french so sorry for my writing.a

 

I'm new to graffiti, this is my first throwie I'm happy with (spike) looking for crits or suggestions

 

Your off to a great start. I'm terrible at throwies but, from a pure artistic POV, my only suggestion would be to play with the sizes of those bubbles. So exaggerate the size of that lower left bubble on the S, middle bubble on the right side of the P, and so forth... I've always felt that the best throwies have a playfulness to them.

Anyway... Hope that helps. Good luck.

 

little sketch i did at school any crits ?

 

Outline is different than shadow, if you go for shadow only add to one side (the black paint). Also dont put the glow (white paint) on opposite sides of letter, doesnt make sense if you think about the light coming from one angle, usually right or left. Make letters more clean, practice on paper, thats not really a throwie, make letters more "bubbly".

Thats good for sure, keep going and experimenting with different styles, letter sizes, spike (on top) sizes, upper/lowecase letters

 

Could I get sum crits on my throwie, i want to get something good down before I start painting. Plus, i don’t have enough paint anyway

 

Roblox ups with the homies…I’m SMEK ONE..

 

yooo that's dope

 

Any tips/crits? this says bg

 

Its cool and not a toy, i think so

 

What should I improve? ​

 

I am not a master, so I'm not the best person to say you that is your throw up sketch cool, ugly, toy or professional or something and I can't say that what would make your sketch better BUT I can say that your throw up sketch is cool and very much better than my throw up sketch so I say that you can do better throwies than me. If you want, you can do shadings to your throw up sketch, it makes it cooler BUT throw up without shadings are also cools I think so. And what you yourself thing about your sketch?

 

Thank you, I think I should prob make the S match the A, I’m gonna make another one later this day.

 

Here is another one

 

I never do throwies but got inpired by Joshgrafx one liners, his tutorials on insta are dope af, this is not one liner just some of the better trys i liked haha

 

been at it for almost a year