^that A doesnt fit in with the rest your D looks like an O your R doesnt really fit in an your G is hard to decipher

 

Seriously considering a name change.

Getrad- the Get half looks alright, but the Rad part looks like shit.

Yosh- Dope, but I think you should put some space in the middle of the Y.

Once- fuckin butter

 

Big blue looks good, fix the second n tho =D

 

haha

and no offence but thats wack too

 

ya thats pretty whack

 

where u from bspolice?

 

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let me know what you think
-thanks

 

den i really dont feel that style.. the way the d is and everythind basic letters?

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That's the best shit I've seen from you man
That o is finally a round ass circle haha

But remember to give the crits to those above you

oh and do a little line in the middle of the e
Sounds stupid but it kills some of the dead space and makes things look better

 

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new word SOHP...crits?

 

den-- bro you got some work.. even out the letter size a bit (the D versus all the rest) focus on your letter style, make the letters flow. and personally, me dont like the crosses in the letters, but thats your call. make the D look less like a N. simple simple simple.

OENE-- good simples, try working on adding your own style tho. but keep it basic, just fuck with the letters some. not bad, but not really good either.



been drawing and shit want some crits reeal bad.

2letter throw
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4letter throw
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CRITS
CRITS
CRITS

 

clean up the stray lines and loops in ur letters and itll look alrite...

 

mare i like that hit me up for an exchange
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you mean ware? or someone else..

 

lol ya ware, im too high for this shit

 

aight i PMd you

moonboots- pretty clean, nice simple style. but almost too simple (in my opinion). mess with the letters a little and shit. keep structure. etc etc.

 

Throw for a battle no one entered.

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rabid nice simples

crits -

like it better with or without the e or e and s

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your throw looks like a side view of a really shriveled pennis. lolz. like it better without the S.