the name is...frankly its terrible

the C is good, the E is good, the R's iight, the K is FUCKED, and so is the A

 

^^ the c and e really arent that good lol

one version of my shit. sloppy as hell but whatever i hate shit on paper

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dope i gotcha with that shit you were talking about earlier let me just make a couple more and ill pm you with the shit

 

dope....i can has?
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i needddd some help i'm dieing here!!

and skwint maybe just have a really short horizontal T bar?

 

Bump for crits, anythin you see wrong with it leme no, no need to be ncie about it either haha

 

your s and h dont have any flow, i like that a though

 

even though there is no H it says sneak, do you mean the N or the K

 

word

you can has....DE'Z NUTS!
the top rep is the best one,you need to work on making all your letters the same size and leved up,and you should move the p back so theres no negitive space and maybe out a hole or swirl or dot in there

 

resp- work on your letters flowing more, the top one and bottom one have potential if they are worked on a lottt
sneak- keep at it, you s need a lot of work
doap- your style is coming alone nicely

new page bump

 

Heres a crappy throw of a new style i was workin on.Crits pl


Wallace-Im liken the 1st and last one
Resp-Like smooth said try not to ahve any negative space

 

I'm likin them so throws wallace

shaolin its waaaaay too bublly and fat

Resp connect your letters
and r's are some of the hardest letters to start a throw imo
Just keep practicing

 

Fuck dent.

 

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Ps i write Shi!

 

introduction to graffiti

 

have <<

 

then you fail

try to make a little simpler, practise normal throws before you try going all crazy on us

and change your name its fucking gay

 

too close to "shiloh"

 

how is my name gay? just because its not something 1030200204 people have? i wanted sumthing i can atleast not worry about people having. and i have done simps. just trying something new.

oh just read ur second post but still it isnt LOL

 

ya and it sucks

get a new name