Yo ansr, I was just wondering what you thought about my shit, sloppiness aside

Rayz- I'm feelin it, but the R is really squished on the left side, throws it all off.

 

i think my throw belongs in hereee





edit: no crits because i suck at giving them :/

 

big blue im really liking the style, its coming along nicely

ansr, your shits clean and pretty simple. keep at it

 

Still working on it but how is it so far?
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Big Blue- What Wallace said
Stussy- Likin that

 

ansr your a man... haha


new kinda technical throw with dripps and accessories chigggguh
ill post new better shit soon, my E is fucked in all these flicks.
crits?

 

pretty good style IMO better than my plain overlapping bunbble throws

 

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the outline is a little nonvisible cuz my marker was dying. crits welcome

 

^^Thats not a Throwie. Learn for the other Examples

 

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crits?

 

and its 80 feet tall and old poop colored.

hpir- your e is bunk and your other letters are meh.. is just seems really plain.try reworking your letters

 

looks good not diggin the curved drips tho man,

 

noticing alot of ppl throws are being kept to paper....well this was my 2nd throw i ever did. and yeah its the back of a barn.
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Constructive criticism please!

 

answer - yo shit was tight man
azul- make all ur letter the same size, get more flow to it, needs work

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critz
and any ideas on wut to do wit the "k"?

 

what a generic name

 

not rlli. an evn so theres not many good writers who do the name so great job being a douche

 

whatever, lose the arrows and make that i into two parts

 

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Crits?
Azul- Make all your letters the same size

 

theres another sike on here that burns you, sorry kiddo

nice bite of snaps arrows also