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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    lose the huge hole in your O... just try a line or something. or play around with like a squiggly line :D
    but i don't like the huge hole.
    don't do it one liner like leak said.
    and uhm... get a better handy.
    your drop shadow on the part on the E... is unnecessary, it doesn't follow the rest of your shadow. you were doing shadow on the left. so it doesn't make sense to do it there... drop shadow is... just imagine your exact throwie right behind yours... so it can't be dropped back to the left AND the right.
     
  2. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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  3. oxiclean

    oxiclean Senior Member

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    Does it say pa or pr?
     
  4. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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  5. oxiclean

    oxiclean Senior Member

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    It looks like it says Pr to me.
     
  6. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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    yeah haha any idea on how i can fix it?
     
  7. JackieChanRollin

    JackieChanRollin Senior Member

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    Lowercase R's tend to look like other letters sometimes.
    I would say try to make a capital R to go along with your capital A.
    Keep it up bro.
    You'll get it soon, just keep sketching.
     
  8. oxiclean

    oxiclean Senior Member

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    Exactly what he said.
     
  9. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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  10. milk boxx

    milk boxx Senior Member

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    fit your E with the rest of your letters. Make it bigger, dont be scared to make it overlap more and make it bigger. do it the exact same as your oneliner style one but just cut off the not needed lines.
     
  11. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    ***toy throwup battle callout***
    Word:Evil.
    Deadline:March 15th
    Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
    Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts
     
  12. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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  13. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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  14. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    less shaky lines.
    your g looks like a C...
    you write ages right?
    keep letters same size. your A is sometimes bigger than rest, your S is smaller, sometimes.
    siiigh,
     
  15. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    okay, thanks.
    still havent fixed the G problem but is this what you mean by less shaky lines?
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  16. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    those lines. idk if you're trying to do it, but it looks like it's accidental, and not clean, SHAKY.
    your last post doesn't have any lines like that. try to stick with doing those lines.
     
  17. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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    your hands moving to fast.. your lines are mad shakey.. slow down and take yur time there stickers... u got as long as you want.. and b4 u waist more slaps.. draw on paper
    and thnx for the crits on mine.. appreciate it!
     
  18. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    thanks sallybsk and blunttokes, i really appreciate the crits, ill try to make it less shaky from now on
     
  19. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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    word dude... just take your time.. use pencils for a bit longer.. then when you know that you have a good style to draw colour that shit in and keep doin ur thing!

    im considered a toy but people all have there opinion.. the picture gallery is full of ignorant fucking retards.. but stay in here till you get told to leave or u gonna get smashed the fuck out over the internet..

    only true words.

    anyone will tell you the same thing but do what you want n how you want ur the only one holding urself back from being good not other people ya know :)


    stay up ages!
     
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  20. shayk

    shayk Senior Member

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    damn blunttokes that shit was deep thats goin on my myspace headline haha but on some real shit hears some of last nights work

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    crits would be cool seems so i didint give any. oh wait i gave crits to tokes on his speach