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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    shaolin, the first six months you were on here you never posted anything of your own and just begged for everybody to do shit for you... and blox, your style is generic as fuck and isnt any better than shaolins.. you both need to listen to romero and shut yur traps lol
  2. Member

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    i really want to progress on my throwies , any crits or tips ?
  3. Blox

    Blox Senior Member

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    Romero=True True True
    Klic=Haha, Gotta start somewhere
  4. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Havent drawn in weeks and everything I'm drawing tonight is to shaky but crits?
  5. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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  6. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    Skwint-nice, i cant really point out anything wrong...
    RA-i dnt really like the space inside of the R

    simple is good right?
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  7. SONE.

    SONE. Senior Member

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  8. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    get rid of the doodads in the S and O, and I think your N is a little goofy looking,
    maybe straighten the lines in it?
  9. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    ahhahah you said doodads
    I can't stop laughing.
    I think i'm high :(
    marry me?
  10. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    sooooooooooooo much talk in here...

    ***toy throwup battle callout***
    Deadline:March 15th
    Rules:No digital modifications,color is your choice,one entry per person and all entries must be on paper.
    Pm all your entries to Smooth_nuts
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2009
  11. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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  12. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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    keep doin ur thing... play wit the letters.. u got a lower case A capital G lower case E try n make the A and E capitals maybe... just my 2cents...

    like this AGES not aGes ya kno.... pce
  13. Bink1

    Bink1 Elite Member

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    are u kidding>?
  14. Zarb

    Zarb Senior Member

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    ^^ how about instead of acting like an asshole you can give me an idea on how to make it better.
  15. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Zarb- the top half of your second letter still seems to have too much space
    DirtyDozen520- Getting better, but try simple block letters like on your keyboard, although your letters are looking more consistent which is good.

    my second attempt

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  16. what4joke...

    what4joke... Senior Member

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  17. Five Sixx Ace

    Five Sixx Ace Senior Member

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    first time taking paint to something since i started writing, i know it sucks but w/e.

    provin- slim up the n a little and fatten that t to take up a little but of the dead space inbetween the e's.
  18. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    eten-I think the E's should be the same..and uhmm go simpler with the T? im new so idk much

    FOER- ilike the F, all the letters look a little bit..crooked?
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    sorta changed the G a lil bit, you think it has some potential if i work on it?
  19. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    just tried an e and n instead of the whole eten. Ignore the blue that's from a previous attempt, and ignore the white, and yes the black outline sucks because my can was almost out and cloging up.

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    Five Six Ace- F and the R need work.
    DirtyDozen520- I like that one muuuuuch better then all the others. (thanks for the crits, yes I can never get my second e the same as the first)
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  20. Apocalypse

    Apocalypse Senior Member

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    Bump for crits?