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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
not feelin the last letter, wtf is it, an r? c?
your W is consistently bigger than the rest of your letters.
your A is the smallest.
aaand not digging the random shit on the top
the bottom part of your "R" is as big as the top, so your letter goes: FAT SKINNY FAT.
fix all those.
work on letters in general.
actualy the A isn't that bad, try curving the second hump more like in the middle picture. And lose the tumor on the right side
and lose the one quote near the W. looks better without it. the first W is the best.
your shadows suck. make them stop on the bottom... if you know what I mean?
Just started last week. Disregard the cartoons, I was bored lol.
try not making your shit so big.
the image size I mean.
LOSE THE ARROW ON THE T.
The extension on the P in the last picture. Make your C rounded.
work on your E.
oh... and that's not a throwie? just looks like a zoomed in tag.
learn your shiet. NEW TO GRAFF THREAD. NEXT?!
Alright cool, Thanks Alot Man!
Will work on that stuff, oh and sorry bout the image size
Hm, photobucket mustve resized them then. Thanks again
are you seriously thinking about writing carpet? i meant really??
just a quick note, photobucket doesent resize it, you have to resize it to large then the photo will be proper size.
for talking ...
my k is brutal
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carpet - lol horrible name no offence, and it isnt really a throwie, read through the new to graff thread
war - work on your r
provin - good job practicing it on plywood or whatever first, try an uppercase E and a lower case n
foer - same deal as provin, and you forgot the 3d for your R
^I like it up to the n, after that it seems to fail, the K especially is terrible IMO, except the last one, and use the lower case e in the 4th one, mesh them all together and get it worked out so it doesn't get small as you draw them, and see how it is then.
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Kam-eh, work on the K a lot, and the M, the a is okay...
Janek-I like it up to the n, after that it seems to fail, the K especially is terrible IMO, except the last one, and use the lower case e in the 4th one, mesh them all together and get it worked out so it doesn't get small as you draw them, and see how it is then.
work on the K, the A is pree. dope and the M needs to have some sharp edges to flow with the rest of the throw.
racked a bunch of decos today, then after i set up that wall i found my old backpack for hs. i dropped out last may. and looks like i never brought this book back. so its a black book of sorts i guess.
anyway. 2 names. cant decide which to use, fuck.
janek- i like it but the top left cornor of the n looks a liite eh.
kam- i like it, looks good.
war- i see you are making all the letters the same size now. looks good.
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Yeah I know it sucks, I like it though. First throw that's good that I've made.
such a chill spot and no burners?
"ak" the a looks okay, but the k dosent look right. the bottow of it is all askew and fucked up porportins and idk im high.
just for furture reference. give crits if you wanna get them.
bump for crittss
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give crits to GET THEM.
Separate names with a comma.