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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    the only one that has potential is the middle on the right
     
  2. -ESO-

    -ESO- Senior Member

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    get off my dick
    who said i wasnt going to post crits of other peoples stuff in another post.
     
  3. -ESO-

    -ESO- Senior Member

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    provinT13 - Try to keep all ur letters the same size/ I cant decifer the last letter.
    SONE - Get rid of the heart, and the arrow part / your N does look so much like an N
    Five Sixx Ace - Try to keep all ur letters the same size / Make your F a little more defined
    DirtyDozen520 - This has potential, I bet if you had a nice fatcap you could make this work.
    Apocalypse - Not bad, im not feelin ur plane R and i think it could be a bit bigger to match the rest.
     
  4. Apocalypse

    Apocalypse Senior Member

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    I didn't? but you asked for crits, and the story 'round these parts is give em to get em.
     
  5. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    No-one goes down there and its more like a practice spot but there will be burners soon ;)
     
  6. Five Sixx Ace

    Five Sixx Ace Senior Member

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    bump to new page for crits.
     
  7. -ESO-

    -ESO- Senior Member

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    Exactly, but literally right after i posted it you bitched.
    I wasn't done writing all my crits
     
  8. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    lol it looks what?
     
  9. Five Sixx Ace

    Five Sixx Ace Senior Member

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  10. ASTAR.DWSP

    ASTAR.DWSP Senior Member

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    what.. just like graff. needs structure... english needs sentence structure..

    AND FOR THE RECORD JANEK HAS SOME MAD CLEAN LINES!! IM FUCKING LOV'N IT!
     
  11. Apocalypse

    Apocalypse Senior Member

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    Sorry mang, no beef, just wanted to see you give them if ur asking for em....nevermind it all.
     
  12. -ESO-

    -ESO- Senior Member

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    no problem man.
     
  13. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Less talk more flicks, heres a boxy style/really out of proportion throw that i was messing around with... needs alot of work.
    ai621.photobucket.com_albums_tt300_2wayducttape_2.jpg
     
  14. bulltimeJAMP

    bulltimeJAMP Senior Member

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    you guys are retarded. didk riding is when you suck up to other writers DUMBASSES.
     
  15. oxiclean

    oxiclean Senior Member

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    Whats a didk?
     
  16. Apocalypse

    Apocalypse Senior Member

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    It's called respect, we're all trying to do the same thing, no reason to start fucking beef idiot...
     
  17. ASTAR.DWSP

    ASTAR.DWSP Senior Member

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    dude.. writers should all work together.. not fuck each other up.. times have changed.. we must unite and let the world know we are here to stay.. and they need to deal with it..
     
  18. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Thanks.

    I'd say you got some nice, consistent, stuff. Time to move on?? You seem to have simple throwies and tags down.

    And to everyone that is bitching, leave all the fucking chit chat to the chit chat thread, post flicks, give and get crits, and get the fuck out, there are actually people that wanna see some posts with helpful advice
     
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  19. Hammertime

    Hammertime New Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://www.roflsaurus.com/users/Hammertime/throwie.jpg

    The letters COULD mean something but it's actually rather because I like these forms. The 'S' I've practiced a lot, the p and the m almost not. I don't consider this finished, nor the way I want it (the shadow is mediocre/bad, the bubbles on top suck ass)
    Constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.
     
  20. DirtyDozen520

    DirtyDozen520 Senior Member

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    ^i dont really like the middle/bottom of the M..those grey things on the top of the letters looks weird. I mean if you did it all around the letters, it might look kool. but idk
    and SPM is a rapper