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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Oarsone-FFSC

    Oarsone-FFSC Senior Member

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    hardwares thats a dope throw up. i am down for an exchange
  2. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    ware- clean up that a and e and i think youll be in real good shape.
    name- needs lots more practice, itll clean itself up after a while
    popn- cute start, reminds me of asian candies
    game- the amount of time and effort it looks like it took you to make that, its not a throw and it looks bad
    bigblue- always been a fan of your style, keep it up
    flert- green one looks solid, lets see it up

    couldnt get a pic before the buff got to it =/... simple ass hollow takes 10 seconds

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  3. Manupro7

    Manupro7 Member

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  4. hardwares

    hardwares Senior Member

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    wallace - the one above the big black square is the most original and my fav. i can see thats what you were going for on that wall so keep it up.
    doze - fix up that curl on the D a bit. and i like the E face. also if you want to do an exchange PM me, just so long as you dont just put up what i give you lol.
  5. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    Sup guys,im working on a 1 letter S and need help to make it better.

    ai39.tinypic.com_2mm5um9.jpg (full throw just for reference)

    Here some shity sketches.crits?


    What do you guys suggest?

    thedudeman-Your letters seemed all mushed together and are a little sloppy.Fix thats and should be better
    Doze-Im really feeling the Z but not so much the other letters,Fix the curl in the D and maybe swich the E up
    Ware-Sick but make the E closer to the
    SO-Shits mint i like the top right one the best
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  6. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    the shadow is off and only on the s?
  7. KidReny!

    KidReny! Senior Member

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    I suggest that you start writin simples yo ur shadow is off like crazy but thats just me lookin at the supposed S y dont you get a bigger pic of ur full throwie
  8. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    My full throw is great i just need help with a 1 letter S.yeah was just messing around with with the shadow not worried about it yet 1st i wana know what i can make better on the 1 letter s.
  9. ~Star~

    ~Star~ Senior Member

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  10. StayHyE

    StayHyE Senior Member

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  11. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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  12. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    It's funny cus both of you suck
  13. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    Last time i checked this was pretty badass and way better than that other fag star and Mr yarbles it seems like your always starting trouble

    But yeah u guys keep talking shit behind your little computer screens thinking your tough.Im here for graff not fighting i do my fighting in my Judo classes every week not on the fucking internet.

    SO if any one can give crits on my 1 letter S that would be great since i gave them out.Like i said shity sketches but let me know what to fix
  14. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Why dont you two just battle the word.... Oh and shaolin... wasent your letters givin to you?

    Shaolin- the eye in the A is kinda lame and I dont like the way you vut off the right leg of the A.

    Critz on mine please.
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  15. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Last time I checked you were incredibally fucking toy.
  16. TheMurderousMisterMero_

    TheMurderousMisterMero_ Banned

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    wow...your hella hxc.
  17. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    absolutely not thats my own style,if you dont believe then check lol and sure Mr yarbles will kill me in hands but 1/2 the shit he writes in hands you cant read and also aslong as my hand aint terriable idc i got a good throwie and gonna get ups.Also havent practiced/wrote in a long time and never rly practiced a handy.

    lol i done with these gay e-fights.Any one got some legit crits?
  18. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    hate to burst your bubble(not really) but that throw is the embodiment of shit.and not in a good way like "hey do0dz that is da sheeeit" but more like " i think theres something on my shoe"
  19. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    i highly doubt that, you definately just bit that off an exchange you did with someone. all you did for 3 months on here was beg for someone to make a throwie for you
  20. ShaolinNy

    ShaolinNy Senior Member

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    Cool story bro

    Weakfinger-Did you do that on paint?Cause it would probally look alot better on paper.Every thing seems ok except the Q looks like a fucked up O

    Im looking for crits on the 1 letter S above.Dont really know how to do a good oone letter so tips would be great

    Ok then ask every person on this forum lol i didnt bite shit on that throw