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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.

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  1. Tonberry

    Tonberry Senior Member

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    Shun that's pretty sick, man.

    Jumpstick (blah, forget your name) make the shadow smaller.

    Here are a few I'll take crits on:

    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_n669267154_981908_1954.jpg
    Reads CERS

    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_n669267154_981913_182.jpg
    Reads GEO

    ai164.photobucket.com_albums_u1_NeoGarland_n669267154_981912_6444.jpg
    Also reads GEO, made the shadow way too big on the 'G'.

    critz kthnx.
     
  2. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    kinda sllopy man...try making it more funkey...umm like less sharp...and with no bars or so ithink...
    and about the shadow ok tnx ill make it smaller
     
  3. Auspicious

    Auspicious Senior Member

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    It's good just not feelin the circles at bottom
     
  4. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  5. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Snap i like the other shit ive seen you do alot better than that one but its not to bad
     
  6. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    thanks lol, i like to experiment with styles you know

    and its OHSNAP lol, snap is an asshole with no can control
     
  7. Tonberry

    Tonberry Senior Member

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    Shie, that shit is pretty dope, man. I really love the S's on the second and last pic, esspecially.

    edit: Fuck that, they're all dope, my friend. Sick how they're not all the same, but still fresh.
     
  8. PatchesO

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  9. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    the left part of the m is way too thick bro
     
  10. PatchesO

    PatchesO Member

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    thanks man, il fix that up tonight
     
  11. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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    HM throwie
    ai137.photobucket.com_albums_q226_D_510_orngehm.jpg
    critz por favor
     
    Last edited: Jun 23, 2008
  12. *Spectone*

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  13. drop one.

    drop one. Senior Member

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    its actually not to badd maybe try n fix up ur letters for a better flow
     
  14. shun

    shun Senior Member

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    shie-from what i can see those are pretty dope.
    smob- yeah, move the m and other letters more to the left, closer to the s
    kase2- do a fill on that bitch next time man. looks pretty good, the H could use some work
    speak- i like it alot. the A and K are your weakest letters imo. pretty clean though
     
  15. tazeone

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  16. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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  17. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Exactly what kase said, and kase that is looking sick man, how tall is it?
    patches-looking nice man, try fixing up the top of the S and get ride of the one sharp point, sticks out.
    Need to keep practicing and cleaning up, but new style im getting at.
    ai25.tinypic.com_9tlaf9.jpg
     
  18. einsamkeit

    einsamkeit Senior Member

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  19. KASE2

    KASE2 Elite Member

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    ^^^ not really feelin tha faces in tha "e" or tha "o"
     
  20. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Ya get rid of the faces, and fix that M. You're A is nice a shit, keep it up.