First of all, give some crits. Second, you need to do mad work on your letters. Fuck 3D. Stick to normal bubble letters and draw the keys on your keyboard using bars.

If that's not good enough: your K looks bad, your 3D is varied, K and A are closed with no negative space but the S has some, the P looks way different than the rest.

 

Yo kasp make the top part of the P bigger

This is the closest thing I have to a throw...ahhh
and my handstyle suckkkksss
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drOping/Slek - I like it, nice and simple, I dont know about it being a throwie, but what ever you want, goes. I think that the fact the L is squashed between the S and E makes it look funny as the other letters are all apart, either bunch it all up or keep them apart, but not too far apart. My opinion. Keep at it though!

 

slek i like it. its not bad my opinion though is dont attach the E to the K

 

This forum sucks hahahah

 

^ Obligatory hate comment.

 

asher-throw is dope i like it(second one) just make it flow a little more i like it though alot


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i changed it up a bit made it more open i think

 

old-ish
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lurch man you are simply killing these tot pages. props to you

 

thanks bro

 

Shit's due on friday, *****s.

 

trying something, crits?
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I think you should open up the o instead of using those lines since the c opens up... it would just improve the balance... i think its a really nice throwie though.. (work on your tag)

 

I agree. I think that closed O messes up the flow because it's like 3 open letters and one closed.. But other than that, try doing some just plain black n white throws. Color comes later.

Slek - Your tag looks like Arabic writing. Is that the purpose? Change it up a bit. Try making the handstyle a tad more readable. Props for being unique though...

 

here some thing good for this page

 

The paper to paint ratio is at like 1,000,000:1.

 

@ sico- its not bad but try and open up your S more on the top and the same with the O get ridda the lines also ur tag isnt bad i like it just make the I a little bit bigger

@dank dk- i like it lol

 

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crits?

 

^ Kasp, give some crits.
Dank - that shit is dirty as fuck, but I like it.
Sico - Open the O, but good job.