thanks heaps guys, i'll try post up some flix of some better ones je...really like the fill, the letters are rad mr. yarbles...digging the a but not so much the e. just cant put my finger on what though
yo yarbles im liken ur throwie but the pointz need a little work..... the point at the top of the e doesnt seem right like itz too tear droppy... i dunno it lookz good... thiz is how i would modify it.... View attachment 391246
Like it Yarbles. B$ Like it but its really not a Throwie. Syn.- Nice Throwie. You just need to come up with a Differnt color Scheme I've seen that allot.
any one down for a online throwie exchange? ill throw up any onez name who iz down for the exchange... pm me
[Broken External Image]:http://img66.imageshack.us/img66/6978/0724082317mn0.jpg how can i get better?
im tryin to get a better throwie for NOE...so far i came up with this.... critz are respected View attachment 391494
man the E and R on that are fresh. not feelin the other letters tho. great start though. keep it goin.
didnt come out as well as i would have hoped i have a good idea of what needs to be changed but any crits would be appreciated
hmm, i would say "back to the drawing board" or something. but ill be constructive. 1)replot your letters, make sure they are all in proportion and are consistant. 2)sketch, sketch, sketch until doing your throw is like taking a piss. 3)if your gonna do a highlight then do it in a thinner cap. 4) fills should be either entirely smooth or entirely scratchy. try to take bigger strokes and go in a more orderly kind of fashion. it looks better and its quicker. peace
well since im still waiting for approval of the oneliner thread ill post this here... View attachment 391684
shits fucken nice lime. iud only put one bar in your e though, not 2. new steez: [Broken External Image]:http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/629/picture83wt2.jpg
said- i like it but i cant read some of the letters, whats it say? lime- i dont think you should be doing one liners right now, i mean it just looks like you're trying too hard. its not worth it to have lines all going through your letters, i'll post up some of my one liners in a little bit anyone wanna exchange...i write sor View attachment 391719 View attachment 391720 View attachment 391721 crits welcome. p.s. notice how in my one line no lines are crossing all over each other, besides the o a little bit but i made it into a mouth so its all good and look how in the one where i added one at the end, i could have stretched a line across the n to make the one all in one line, but I didnt cuz it would look wack i hope that made sense
what ive been throwing up lately, crits are really appreciated i want to push the "a" in closer but then it messes up the top of the "s" [Broken External Image]:http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/9158/phone0010pm7.jpg sor- the r doesn't seem like it fits said- i like it, nice flow lime- looks good, the ! is a little off though