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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
anybody feelin the name frisk? or splaz?
thanks for giving some actual* advice lol. even if it wasn't for me, still helps more than most people on here.
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your F stands for Fail
seriously now, real crits:
your F stands for Fail, come up with a whole new one
the A and K's structure could lead to an ok style if you work on their flow better
the S needs to lose that hole in the top part coz it's giving it an edge, and since you're working with round corners everywhere, having that one abrupt edge is bad.
all in all, you gotta make your curves more perfect, round them right and evenly, the way they are now you're mixing straight lines with curved ones. and you gotta be a pro to pull off that mix. for now, just stick to one kinda lines.
and final tip: don't 3D your throwies
First time painting today.. Damn i suck!
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What were you using for an outline? A pink dot?
Nah! my friend told me to learn to use NY fat caps for everything.. that was NY fat cap all the way
No, you need to learn to paint first. Use stock caps and get a steady hand, learn how to fill, learn how to cut, etc. Don't worry about fancy caps right now. Just learn to paint.
Yea thats true.. ill probably go out again tomorow.. try to work with caps and stuff
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ignore the lines and fill and hand, this was with left over paint and the spray kept fucking up lol. Just crit letters.
fask - use a different cap lol. loose the space in the F.
kesk - looks mad good to me. Don't like the ONE in a throw though
dusk - first one's your best.. get rid of the little penis on the D, make everything the same size, and work on structure
thanx bro. and it was a shitty d haha made that shit too skinny
I never use tips because I can't (I only have access to cheap industrial male cans where I live).
If you can master the deal with stock tips like dem grimey bombers holdin shit down
get can control, clean lines, even fills and no drips. you got it made
word is bond brother
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hipe - try extending your 3d a little more and maybe try making it a little bigger. if you make things softer like the e it makes the bomb look cleaner
south right? but that is fresh alot of steez.. and thanks 4 the crits
and remember you got the whole page
if you just write it over and over you'll develop flow
edit:that actually says youth haha sorry stoner moments and all
yeah I've been putting in the work and got alot more to do. I've learned it doesn't develop in just a few months
Damn, that shit kills, South.
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