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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Fube, Apr 10, 2008.
Deos U gotta cool name....but anyway i like tha 1st one & tha last one wit tha i think teal color
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Don't even pay attention to Slap, looking for suggestions on the cry and klick, second real attempt at this
Deos. You're getting ahead of yourself is all I can say. Interesting take on a one liner, although I don't think you're ready to take that on yet. I like your lowercase letters more, but try to make all your letters the same size for now no matter what you're writin. Also, your handstyles are illegible. Space out your letters and make them look more like letters. And for the last one, don't mix straight letters and script, that tag is really confusing. Start simpler. Not hatin, just my 2 cents but you can take it or leave it.
Invert. Study graffiti. There's plenty of pictures on this site, put them to use. Start simple, like really, really fucking simple and just keep writin it. You'll get the hang of it eventually. It's easier if you pick letters that you can flow easily and make a name from those instead of picking a name and trying to cater to it. Some basic pointers: Have your letters the same basic size and shape, and have them touching as much as possible but not so much that they're squished. Also, don't sketch your throws, ever. Flow solid lines till you get the hang of it. Graff is definitely not somethin you can just jump into and be dope. It takes practice. Keep at it.
Rewz. the kink in the a makes it look like an R kinda. Shits ill regardless.
good advice and I hear ya here for sure. shit IS ill.
Tryin out somethin new, just a quick doodle. Lemme know how lame it is.
Love the 'no' on that mate,
"Note" i feel that i like how you can use your T its hard to work with that deadspace but it feels like the N and O over power the T and E and id give you my 2 cents but i need Rusto
note you need a new N.
Shiiiiit, that was the new N. I'm tryin out a bunch of new shit. I just woke up I'll post some revised shit in a bit. The T is definitely hard to flow sometimes but I'm workin on it. Ynot RIP helped me a lot with that. I totally agree with all yall thanks much for the crits.
I thought what I drew was as simple as it's going to get? How simple should I start then?
I hate asking, but what to do with the keyboard letters. I know to draw them but should I just work on being steady with it or practice bars or what?
Invert you practice your bars and striaghts with them you can basically devolop a new style.
Seil- i like your S and E but your I and L need work so does your handy
thanks for the crit, ill try to come up with something more similar to the S and E.
IMO I's and L's are hard
Word, the S and the E are sorta boxy and the I and the L are bubbly. Throw a few corners and some steez on em it should be lookin nice.
havent posted in awhile new throwie concept any critzz?
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